TLK
September 24, 2012, 7:52pm
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and share the name of the poet if you know
Tum eisa kerna kay ko’ee jugnoo, ko’ee sitaraa sambhaal rakhnaa
Meray andheroN kee fikr choRo, tum apnay ghar kaa khyaal rakhnaa
Udaas mausam, UjaaR dhartee main, faasl bo’ee thee, chandni kee
ub us maiN ugnay lagay andheray to jee main kaisaa malaal rakhnaa
wo rasm-o-raah hee nahee rahay jub, asaasay kis kaam kay tumhaaray
udhar say guzraa, kabhee to looN gaa, mere khatoN ko nikaal rakhna
HaDiiA
September 25, 2012, 3:22am
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**Tum Aisa Karna Keh Koi Jugnoo Koi Sitara Sambhaal Rakhna
Mere Andhero'n Ki Fikar Choro Bas Apne Ghar Ka Khayal Rakhna
Ujaar Mosam Mein Rait Dharti Pe Fasal Boi Thi Chaandni Ki
Ab Is Mein Ugnay Lagay Andhere To Kaisa Jee Mein Malaal Rakhna
Diyaar-e-Ulfat Mein Ajnabi Ko Safar hai Darpesh Zulmato'n ka
Kahi'n Woh Raahon Mein Kho Na Jaaye Zara Darechay Ujaal Rakhna
Wo Rasm-o-Raah He Nahi'n Rahe Jab To Naamay Kis Kaam Ke Tumhare
Udhar Se Guzraa Kabhi To LooN Ga Mere Khato'N Ko Nikaal Rakhna
Bicharne Wale Ne Waqt-e-Rukhsat Kuch Is Nazar Se Palat Ke Dekha
Keh Jaise Woh Bhi Yeh Keh Raha Ho Tum Apne Ghar Ka Khayal Rakhna
Yeh Dhoop Chaao'n Ka Khel Hai Ya Khizaa'n Bahaaro'n Ki Ghaat Mein Hai
Naseeb-e-Subh Ujrooj Ho To Nazar Mein Shaam-e-Zawaal Rakhna
Kisay Khabar Thi Keh Kab Ye Mosam Uraa Ke Rakh De Ga Khaak "Aazar"
Tum Ehtiyatan Zamee'n Ke Sar Pe Falak Ki Chaadar Bhi Daal Rakhna
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Aezaaz Ahmed Aazar
Kinzz
September 25, 2012, 3:24am
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Tlk bhai app aaj kal poetry Mai Zyada paye Jane lagay hain
STA
September 25, 2012, 3:25am
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and share the name of the poet if you know
Tum eisa kerna kay ko’ee jugnoo, ko’ee sitaraa sambhaal rakhnaa
Meray andheroN kee fikr choRo, tum apnay ghar kaa khyaal rakhnaa
Udaas mausam, UjaaR dhartee main, faasl bo’ee thee, chandni kee
ub us maiN ugnay lagay andheray to jee main kaisaa malaal rakhnaa
wo rasm-o-raah hee nahee rahay jub, asaasay kis kaam kay tumhaaray
udhar say guzraa, kabhee to looN gaa, mere khatoN ko nikaal rakhna
now you are asking this poet second time. pehlay bhi bataya tha poet ka naam. :pcg:
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achi baat hai.. log shayari ki taraf mutawaja ho rahe hain.. aur TLK to aate jate rehte hain poetry main
TLK
September 25, 2012, 3:21pm
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HaDiiA:
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**Tum Aisa Karna Keh Koi Jugnoo Koi Sitara Sambhaal Rakhna
Mere Andhero’n Ki Fikar Choro Bas Apne Ghar Ka Khayal Rakhna
Ujaar Mosam Mein Rait Dharti Pe Fasal Boi Thi Chaandni Ki
Ab Is Mein Ugnay Lagay Andhere To Kaisa Jee Mein Malaal Rakhna
Diyaar-e-Ulfat Mein Ajnabi Ko Safar hai Darpesh Zulmato’n ka
Kahi’n Woh Raahon Mein Kho Na Jaaye Zara Darechay Ujaal Rakhna
Wo Rasm-o-Raah He Nahi’n Rahe Jab To Naamay Kis Kaam Ke Tumhare
Udhar Se Guzraa Kabhi To LooN Ga Mere Khato’N Ko Nikaal Rakhna
Bicharne Wale Ne Waqt-e-Rukhsat Kuch Is Nazar Se Palat Ke Dekha
Keh Jaise Woh Bhi Yeh Keh Raha Ho Tum Apne Ghar Ka Khayal Rakhna
Yeh Dhoop Chaao’n Ka Khel Hai Ya Khizaa’n Bahaaro’n Ki Ghaat Mein Hai
Naseeb-e-Subh Ujrooj Ho To Nazar Mein Shaam-e-Zawaal Rakhna
Kisay Khabar Thi Keh Kab Ye Mosam Uraa Ke Rakh De Ga Khaak “Aazar”
Tum Ehtiyatan Zamee’n Ke Sar Pe Falak Ki Chaadar Bhi Daal Rakhna
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Aezaaz Ahmed Aazar
Thanks Hadiia. So third shair has ‘naamay’ and not ‘asaasay’. I was always confused between both.
achcha ab kum nazar aa’oon gaa.
I posted these shairs once in my blog. I dont remember anyone telling me who the poet is. did you?
STA
September 25, 2012, 3:22pm
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yes, posted it in 2009 too and asking poet name. app bar bar bhol jatay hain.
jiia
September 25, 2012, 3:38pm
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jiski vaja se vo shair yad hein vo barbar yad aata hoaga
TLK
September 25, 2012, 3:42pm
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post the link please.
You mean Billu barbar?
jiia
September 25, 2012, 3:45pm
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TLK:
post the link please.
You mean Billu barbar?
lol…
STA
September 25, 2012, 3:46pm
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TLK:
post the link please.
You mean Billu barbar?
http://www.paklinks.com/gs/intikhaab/312707-mehfil-e-mushairah.html
TLK
September 25, 2012, 3:57pm
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Good memory you have STA :k:
jiia
September 25, 2012, 4:08pm
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and yr memory is so week
TLK
September 25, 2012, 4:10pm
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jiia:
and yr memory is so week
Honest to goodness, I did not remember. Yes you are right, mine is weak.
jiia
September 25, 2012, 4:11pm
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geara badam nihar moo
TLK
September 25, 2012, 4:12pm
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geara? what is that?
jiia
September 25, 2012, 4:14pm
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u dont know GINTI counting ELEVEN
TLK
September 25, 2012, 4:15pm
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Oh 11 badaam.
ok :D
jiia
September 25, 2012, 4:16pm
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g
ehsan
October 21, 2012, 10:27am
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I read this on radio last night and it was a big hit.