Poetry Game

insha_ji · January 29, 2007, 5:01pm

Asalam o alikum

Tu jinaab tamam khawateen o hazraat yeh thread is liyeh shoroo kia hey taakeh jitne bhi hamare Adeb se talooq rukhne wale log hain zara khul ker saamne aien.

Yeh game aise hey misre ka jawab misre se dena hey jaise.

Ik ne likha… Salam e ishq meri jaan zara qabool karlo …
2nd poster should complete with there own misra. Yani keh aap khood misra banain ge. Wazen or naser ki koie kaid nahi jaisa ap chahain likhain mager shair zaroor lage. Tu jinaab shroo karta hoon umeed he aap log zaroor is se lutef andoz honge.

Merta hoon arzoo me keh ay kash likh sakoon… So next person should complete this and the games goes on.

Merta hoon arzoo me keh ay kash likh sakoon…

Amal · January 29, 2007, 11:08pm

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Merta hoon arzoo me keh ay kash likh sakoon...
hum'dum meiN terey naam har saaNs likh sakooN

Luckiest_Family · January 30, 2007, 1:31pm

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Merta hoon arzoo me keh ay kash likh sakoon
**wo khat jo loh-e-dil pe likhay hain teray lyay **

insha_ji · January 30, 2007, 1:41pm

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wo khat jo loh-e-dil pe likhay hain teray lyay
wo sub tere naam mey raqem kar sakoon

AQ · January 30, 2007, 6:08pm

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There was a similar thread opened long before title **Mehfil-e-Shukhanwaran-e-Gupshup ... **Nice idea...

Will be right back.. if I remember :)

AQ · January 30, 2007, 6:12pm

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wo sub tere naam mey raqem kar sakoon
Iss tarah hee gar Mohabbat Amar kar sakooN

insha_ji · January 30, 2007, 7:21pm

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Iss tarah hee gar Mohabbat Amar kar sakooN
Dil tu kia yeh zindagi bhi teri rah mein bicha doon

chodhry · January 31, 2007, 6:17pm

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Dil tu kia yeh zindagi bhi teri rah mein bicha doon
phir soochta hoon, chooru, koi fayda nahien

:p

or

Dil tu kia yeh zindagi bhi teri rah mein bicha doon
per tumhien udhaaar pasiey dey doon, mumkin nahien

:p :p

insha_ji · January 31, 2007, 6:37pm

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phir soochta hoon, chooru, koi fayda nahien
tumhain apne faide ki soojhi hey hum baizar baithe hain lol

Amal · February 6, 2007, 1:29pm

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So much silence here? :(

insha_ji · February 6, 2007, 2:21pm

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aap continue rakho take the last line from my previous post and post your misra with it.

fara · February 16, 2007, 1:42pm

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**Dil tu kia yeh zindagi bhee teri raah main bicha dooN

Tu nay mujhay anmol kia hay khud meray liyee...
**

Amal · February 16, 2007, 2:03pm

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**
KhahisheiN phir rahi heiN chamaktey huwey chehrey leeye
Tu nay mujhay anmol kia hay khud meray liyee...
**

fara · February 16, 2007, 2:27pm

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**KhahisheiN phir rahi heiN chamaktey huwey chehrey leeye

***Tishnagi khattam hui, wasl kay imkaan nay chehra mera sajaya hay!*

insha_ji · February 16, 2007, 2:29pm

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Tu nay mujhay anmol kia hay khud meray liyee...
mene khud ko mohabat ki saza di tere liyee

insha_ji · February 16, 2007, 2:52pm

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Tishnagi khattam hui, wasl kay imkaan nay chehra mera sajaya hay!
tujhe paane ki khooshi mein, hur cheez keh jaise nikher aiee hay

deadsoul · February 19, 2007, 8:00pm

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tujhe paane ki khooshi mein, hur cheez keh jaise nikher aiee hay
itni khushi hum say sanbhli nahi aur ankh phir say bhur aiee hay

fara · February 19, 2007, 9:42pm

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** Itni khushi hum say sanbhli nahi aur ankh phir say bhur aiee hay

Humain Maloom hay iss wasl main chuppi lambi tanhayee hay!
**

Pakeeza · February 20, 2007, 7:36am

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wow very good fara :k:

Sannan · February 20, 2007, 11:18am

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Humain Maloom hay iss wasl main chuppi lambi tanhayee hay!
Magar Phir Bhi Tairay Aay Jan-Jahan Talabgar Hoeye Hain