Its by Alama Iqbal.
Nakhcheer-e-mohabbat ka, Qissa NahiN Toolani.
Lutf-e-Khalish-e-PaikaN, Aasoodgiye Fitraak.
Dont worry about the Difficult words.
Nakhcheer = Shikaar, Prey. But not as a verb, as a noun. ( The one being hunted).
Toolani = Lamba, LONG.
PaikaN = Teer, The Arrow.
Fitraak = Thaila jiss maiN shikar rakha jata hai. A kind of sack for putting your hunt into.
Lets see what I get.
Oye... Mambay.... Iqbal Uncle ka tou meri Samajhdani maiN Seedha seedha Shair naheeN aata.. and.. kahaaN.. ye.. Jalebi jesa Seedha shair :D
Me Ko To Chakkar Aaying 
^^
Ateast try to karo na bhayiyo. Mushkil alfaz ke matlab bhi bata diye haiN. 
muge to nazer he nehen aing:hehe:
itna mushkil to mera paper bhe nehe tha:hehe:
PS: inam kia mile ga yei bata do shaid pher try kerh he loon 
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Originally posted by *Masoom Muskaan: *
PS: inam kia mile ga yei bata do shaid pher try kerh he loon :D
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Chalo, Inaam Aap Khod Mang lo, Phir daikhaiN ge ke meray bas ka hai ke nahiN. :)
hmm ziada arsa nhi huwa muhabbat ka shikar huwe huwe.. uff its too hard and its been a while since ive done sum tashreeh... but dnt wry i'll get back to it
I will be waiting. Dont take long. 
Mamab jee aisey palley nahien perta, ess key aagye peechey waaley bhi at least aik aik sher layien phir tashreeh ho sakey gee. ;)
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*Originally posted by chodhry: *
Mamab jee aisey palley nahien perta, ess key aagye peechey waaley bhi at least aik aik sher layien phir tashreeh ho sakey gee. ;)
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chodhry bhai. dont worry about the other lines.
Jo bhi hai, issi shair maiN hai.
And to all. Atleast give a try.
Kuch to kaho, chahay ghalat hi kyoN na ho.
MaiN nay copy past kaar liya hay...
baad maiN aram-o-sakuN say etmanan say Tashreeh karooN gi..
Or agar kaal taak zindha rahi to jo meri aqal maiN aya likh dooN gi..
:D
Wesy choudry sahib to kaar hi daiN gay na...
:-)
MaiN ne Phir Bhi try Ki hay..... Ke Kuch Pallay paR jayeee...
1 baTa 4... (One Fourth) shair dimaagh me aata hay.. samajh aa jaati hay... Jab.. aglay 1 baTa 4 ke baaray maiN... Samajhdaani pe Load Dalta huN tou...... Pehla wala bhool jaaata hay :(
MaiN ne... hathyaar Daal diye....
Let se.... kahaaaN se Tashreeeeh Nazil hoti hay... :)
Be waiting.. for it..
^^ Yaar Golden Bhai, ye to BaRi zyadti hai, sab kehtay haiN, baad maiN batayaiN ge. Par Aik baar jo gaya phir wapas na aya :(
ShaRaRa
Chohdry
Swera
When is going to be that comeback of yours. :(
wo inam he kia jo manga jai 
Wah
To phir Muskaan Ji, Aap tashreeh kar daiN, Inaam bhi mill jaye ga.
Wo effort hi kya, jo Inaam ke lalach maiN kiya jaye. 
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*Originally posted by Azad: *
Wah
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Azad bhai, ki samajh maiN aa gaya. Uchling and claping
Azad bhai, ki samajh maiN aa gaya. Uchling and claping
Ab wo Tashreeh karaiN ge. :)
ChalaiN Azad bhai, jaldi se tashreeh bhi kar daiN please.
okaay here goes nothin :p
the sher is not about ishq-e-mijaazi, its about ishq-e-haqeeqi if u know wat i mean..
chalega itna?
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*Originally posted by ShaRaRa: *
okaay here goes nothin :p
the sher is not about ishq-e-mijaazi, its about ishq-e-haqeeqi if u know wat i mean..
chalega itna?
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Ohhh My God.
Sharara, itnay intizar ke baad ye :(
Do you know dear Sharara Ji, that almost every shair of Iqbal can be interpreted in both the Majazi and the Haqeeqi way. So lets not go into that detail. Just tell me what is the meaning of this verse. :(
I’m here..
Lakin mery paly kooch nahiN paRa 
**Nakhcheen-e-mohabbat ka, Qissa NahiN Toolani.
Lutf-e-Khalish-e-PaikaN, Aasoodgiye Fitraak.
**
*Shikar-e-muhabat ka qisa (kahani) nahin toolani ( kambha karma)
Lutf-e-khalish (regret, right??) paikan ( teer) asoodigay Fitraak ( sack)
*
Apni muhabat kay qisay ko maiN lambha nahiN karta…Jesy ik shikari ho, shikari nay teer youn phenka kay yahan laga…
Khalish jo hay usay zahir nahiN karta!
Jo teer laga tha mery seenay maiN us zahaum ko maiN zahir nahiN kart!
Black Munda, sahib meri aqal shareef maiN kooch nahiN aya..
Iqbal sahib nay itni mushkil shairi ki hi kioN jo kisi kay play hi na paRay usay likhnay ka faidha?
Aisa karaiN ap KHOOD bhi tashreeh karaiN plEase..
