Pehli Punjabi Amad

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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:salam:
Hazreen! Ham rp bhi amad hoi woh bhi Punjabi shyr ki,Tu Dil Thamiy ky ham ny bhi Nazam numa Ghazal kh dali Kamzoor dil khwateen o Hazrat B Care Full! Shukriya,
Allah ny dita chapr phar ky
Bandy ny lita palla phar ky
[RIGHT]{chpron ho ky palion giya}[/RIGHT]
Aya ghusa chachy ty chachi non ***
ty rakhdiy meno her waly Tar ky
khndi ay tera chacha hy bra chup
*** jadon boliya, aboliya kafan phar ky
Kal chachi mssan apri pykian non
Chacha gal lagiya mery Dhar Mar ky
kehnda si teri chachi rakhdi ay ***
khnajar Taniya da Mery siny gar ky
Main kiya Chach basTerian hawan ***
*** kalyja rakhta mera sarr ky***
Akhri shyr araz hy Kamzor dil khwateen o hazrat sy iltimas hy ky dil tham lain :frowning:

Jehry bach gay zalzaly dy war ton
***Main MUkya unahn no Shyr mar ky:D ***
***Kho kysa:fifa: ***

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Re: Pehli Punjabi Amad

GN : MashaAllah Amud aur woh bhi Punjabi main ??? Subhan Allah …

Kal chachi mssan apri pykian non

GN yah mssan kia hota hay ??? nazam to buhat khub hay especially kafan phar kay aur palla par kay :rotfl: …magar parhnay main buhat dushwari hoi hay …

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***Main bhi hyran hon itni achi ya shai dbuhat bri Punjabi a kysy gai :confused: ***
***Massan mian Khuda khuda kr ky ,mushkil sy maiky gai chachi :smiley:Shukriya for Nadir khiyalat or pasandidgi ka:) ***

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Nice GN :smiley: Bohot hii tabaah-kun ghazal hai. Richter scale par iss ki shiddat bhee 7.6 se zyada hii ho gii :slight_smile:

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tadi ghazal ney tey menu hala k rakh ditta g, mukki te nain main par chatkey haley tak lagdey paye ney:D

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^^ Shukriya Sahhab and Jhansi Ki Rani ji, Maza agiya yeh zalzala zadgan jysy quote prh kr.Buhat shukriya.Pta chal rha hy ky mutasreen hain:D

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Jehry bach gay zalzaly dy war ton
Main MUkya unahn no Shyr mar ky :smiley:

Lian Gi mujhay par bhi Aamud Hoie hay …

Ussi Jeeran Day Pahlwan Phai To Bach Gaiy aa’n Nus Kay
Tusi Key Maroo Gay Sanoon Huns Kay :hmmm:

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goodnews, nice one :hehe::k: Punjabhi mizaah ki aek apni hi baat hey :slight_smile:

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Buhat Shukriya Amal:) Ap ki staish ki or hi bat hy.:slight_smile: Thanks Again

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Acha hy thuri islah ki agar qabool ho tu:smiley:
***Uss Jiran Dy Pehlwan Phra ton:phajja: ***
Bach giya aa’n waly sir nus ky:sheen:
***Roz Roz Asi nai Phansan waly:no: ***
Tusi ki maro gy Sanoon Huns ky :hehe:
Adab Araz :roman:

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:wsalam:
GN kmal kiti ae qasme.:omg:punjabi sher cha ge o k:rotfl:fer liao koi nawi nazam hun :clap:

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Originally Posted by Sannan
*Jehry bach gay zalzaly dy war ton
Main MUkya unahn no Shyr mar ky

Lian Gi mujhay par bhi Aamud Hoie hay …

Ussi Jeeran Day Pahlwan Phai To Bach Gaiy aa’n Nus Kay
Tusi Key Maroo Gay Sanoon Huns Kay :hmmm:*

menon shak penda aey tusi munda o,mudian de hlat di ayni chngi akasi te munde wi nai kr sakde ju tusi krde o:(kion snnan pa ji

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**Naheen O Paa Gi… GN Aapa No’n Tussi Munda Nah Banao :nono: … **

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o kion:confused:

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***kion ka matlab :aq: ***

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why

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tuhadi punjabi qabliat main dekhi amal di ghazal te:omg:

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:mad: O yaar to tay chawal ee mar deti hay … iday which koi nah samjhan wali gal aaeee :naraz:

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chawalee ki jadon o mundian wali glan krdi aie te main ki kran.tuhade kol ki saboot gn kurri he but munda nai:confused:

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Abby terry pass kia saboot hy k tu munda hy kurri nahi:mad: