paa'ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k

NikamiJano · January 17, 2003, 1:27am

paa’ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k
ik dasht-e-intzaaR ko jaada keay huweY
ankhoN maiN lay k jalteY huweY moasmon ki raakh
gaRd-e-safaR ko tuN ka libadaa keaY huweY

Amal · January 17, 2003, 2:39am

Re: paa'ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

paa'ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k
ik dasht-e-intzaaR ko jaada keay huweY
ankhoN maiN lay k jalteY huweY moasmon ki raakh
gaRd-e-safaR ko tuN ka libadaa keaY huweY
[/QUOTE]

NikamiJi poori ghazal post karni thi na, AIA to aap ke bhi favrouite
heiN na? ;) ... anyway, it's a beautiful ghazal...thanx for this selection :)

WiseGuy · January 17, 2003, 4:24am

Re: paa'ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

paa'ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k
ik dasht-e-intzaaR ko jaada keay huweY
ankhoN maiN lay k jalteY huweY moasmon ki raakh
gaRd-e-safaR ko tuN ka libadaa keaY huweY
[/QUOTE]

Wah Jano jee, dobara parh ker bhi bohat acha laga...
Khoob :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 17, 2003, 4:52am

beautiful:k::k:

chand_chehra · January 17, 2003, 6:52am

Re: paa’ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k

very nice jano gi :k:

Dragon_King · January 17, 2003, 7:09am

Buhat Khoob Nikami :k:

Dilsay · January 17, 2003, 9:27am

Very nice...

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 17, 2003, 11:56am

Re: paa’ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k

boht achei nikamijeee:)

Rameesha · January 17, 2003, 2:43pm

Re: paa'ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

paa'ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k
ik dasht-e-intzaaR ko jaada keay huweY
ankhoN maiN lay k jalteY huweY moasmon ki raakh
gaRd-e-safaR ko tuN ka libadaa keaY huweY
[/QUOTE]

buhat umdaa NJ ...

Eastern_Thoughts · January 17, 2003, 7:28pm

Great Choice :k:

kuchh aise ghaao bhii hote hai.n jinhe.n zaKhmii aap nahii.n dhote bin roye huye aa.Nsuo.n kii tarah siine me.n chhupaa ke rakhate hai.n aur saarii umr nahii.n rote

niinde.n bhii muhaiyaa hotii hai.n
sapane bhii duur nahii.n hote
kyuu.N phir bhii jaagate rahate hai.n
kyuu.N saarii raat nahii.n sote
**
ab kis se kahe.n ai jaan-e-vafaa
ye ahal-e-vafaa kis aag me.n jalate rahate hai.n
kyuu.N bujh ke raakh nahii.n hote

Jaan_Lewaa · January 18, 2003, 12:03am

:k::k:

Lamhay · January 18, 2003, 8:16am

bahut khoob Nikami !

nikii · January 18, 2003, 2:19pm

wowww bhut khoob nikami siso :k:

NikamiJano · January 18, 2003, 9:06pm

Re: Re: paa'ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

NikamiJi poori ghazal post karni thi na, AIA to aap ke bhi favrouite
heiN na? ;) ... anyway, it's a beautiful ghazal...thanx for this selection :)
[/QUOTE]

thanks ....Aymal us waqat sirf yehi sher likhnay ka mun ho raha tha u know it's depend on mood...lakin phir karey ghi sari gazal..:)

wesay sarey AAA walay sha'er hamarey fav hain u know...AIA...Aitbaar sajad...Amal ahmed..;)

NikamiJano · January 18, 2003, 9:11pm

Re: Re: paa'ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Wah Jano jee, dobara parh ker bhi bohat acha laga...
Khoob :)
[/QUOTE]

thanks WG....tesri dafa na parhna warna aur acha lagay gha..:)

NikamiJano · January 18, 2003, 9:15pm

Re: Re: paa’ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k

thanks chando g

NikamiJano · January 18, 2003, 9:16pm

also thanks dilse...nikii sis..lamhay sis...jaan lawa...Rameesha...dragon...:)

NikamiJano · January 18, 2003, 9:18pm

Re: Re: paa’ooN se khawab bhandh shaam-e-visal k

thanks mashoom g ap be bohat achi and thanks 4 liking ma koyal…yani avataar..

NikamiJano · January 18, 2003, 9:19pm

thanks ET…and nice one …aur ap ho kahan itnay din se sab khayrait hia na..

_Passionate · January 18, 2003, 10:10pm

bohat khoob...:)