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lol God knows!
I actually liked the details, if he had wrote they had a horrible time without explaining then the story would have been boring.
chalo if he wants to finish or not, i dont really care as i have imagination and somehow i predicted the ending in my imagination. 
bye
no one would have visited this thread if he had written "iram and ali went to las vegas" .. whats the big deal in that? A zillion people go there :D The details added spice to the story ..
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I wouldnt mind the details if he actually consider to end the story but I am certainly not interested in all those details which are just there to drag the story
Anyways enjoy the story girls ;)
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ohhhhhhhhhhh , i just started reading this story today and my eyes r hurting now, but i really dont think that it is a true story.How can someone remember so many so many details, of time and date.
for some reason it wont let me post the link
www*[dot]pakpassion[dot]net/ppforum/showthread[dot]*php?t=57307
read the thread! the guy posts 1 part every 5 -10 days and everyone is pissed!
the thing is the guy is passing it off as his story until some1 blows his whistle!
To be honest, I was upset to find out that MY story was being copied to an other forum. I registered to the site and was unable to locate the thread. I then wrote it to the moderator asking why could I not locate the thread. The moderator told me that the story had been removed from the forum. Moderator told me that the user in fact asked them to remove it once it was revealed that this was a copy from an other forum.
I am in the process of completing the story and will post it in one go once completed.
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^ I am finishing it up and should be done soon. Will post the complete story probably in about a week.
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So I read all the 26 pages in one sitting and I can totally relate to you in the first few. It gave me a glimpse of my future had I not called off my relationship. I got into a similar situation, as did Ali and Irrum. Only in my case, I never fooled around with anyone on the side or previously. I was completely committed so much so that I wouldn't even make female friends. The girl I loved so dearly lied to me and violated our trust, as was Ali's case. The relationships started with a lie and continued on with a lie, almost like a fraud. I did everything while under the spell of a lie. In my case I found out completely by chance. I never had her passwords or even access to her online accounts, I thought that was intrusion of privacy but I met her as a part of surprise and she was with her friends. One of her friends ended up complimenting me for my openness as I was okay with her going out with other guy and with her past affairs. I was shocked because I didn't even know anything. Despite all the love I had for her, I stopped seeing her. Ofcourse, there were emotional blackmails and threats but does that justify my presence in a relationship that I don't believe in? or taking revenge on her by wasting my/her time or even further complicating the matter by getting intimate with her? I believe its a moral decision. I could have taken the next step if I wanted to but then there would be no difference between me and her, so its better to take a step back.
But still I can sympathizes with Ali because when your trust gets violated from the very person you trust and love the most, and who is suppose to uphold that trust. Its impossible to hold on to your sanity in that moment. I cannot explain in words what one goes through but you lose your ability to trust someone and specially women. You wonder how can you even trust a woman ever again? I can still feel the angry and aggression inside me because I never got to confront her. I left at a good note but I'm going to make sure that I never cross paths with her again. Thanks for writing the story... :)
So I read all the 26 pages in one sitting and I can totally relate to you in the first few. It gave me a glimpse of my future had I not called off my relationship. I got into a similar situation, as did Ali and Irrum. Only in my case, I never fooled around with anyone on the side or previously. I was completely committed so much so that I wouldn't even make female friends. The girl I loved so dearly lied to me and violated our trust, as was Ali's case. The relationships started with a lie and continued on with a lie, almost like a fraud. I did everything while under the spell of a lie. In my case I found out completely by chance. I never had her passwords or even access to her online accounts, I thought that was intrusion of privacy but I met her as a part of surprise and she was with her friends. One of her friends ended up complimenting me for my openness as I was okay with her going out with other guy and with her past affairs. I was shocked because I didn't even know anything. Despite all the love I had for her, I stopped seeing her. Ofcourse, there were emotional blackmails and threats but does that justify my presence in a relationship that I don't believe in? or taking revenge on her by wasting my/her time or even further complicating the matter by getting intimate with her? I believe its a moral decision. I could have taken the next step if I wanted to but then there would be no difference between me and her, so its better to take a step back.
But still I can sympathizes with Ali because when your trust gets violated from the very person you trust and love the most, and who is suppose to uphold that trust. Its impossible to hold on to your sanity in that moment. I cannot explain in words what one goes through but you lose your ability to trust someone and specially women. You wonder how can you even trust a woman ever again? I can still feel the angry and aggression inside me because I never got to confront her. I left at a good note but I'm going to make sure that I never cross paths with her again. Thanks for writing the story... :)
aww!
but at least we got to hear the story all in one go without having to wait around
Oh thats so sad to hear Navaid!
Yea, it pretty sad to hear but, on the bright side, I'm glad because it happened. I learned a lot and while I was with her, I was supremely happy so I still pray that she gets the best in both worlds. Sometimes we have to make mistakes inorder to learn, she learned not to be dishonest, I learned not to trust blindly. But the question that does come to one's mind is how can one human being do this to another human being? And that's a general question I'm asking. I read a post by Aisha baji, where she says that one of her relatives were coned by someone pretending to be rich just to marry off in a rich family. So why do people do such monstrosities?
Anyhow, I still think what Ali did was wrong, he shouldn't have avenge her because at some point he did love her and if he did love her then he shouldn't have thought about getting back at her. But considering his inexperience, he made a mistake and paid heavily. Alas, a life wasted :)
But if the author can ask Ali one question from me, I would be very grateful. I believe, Allah gives every person two chances at finding true love or their soul mates; now involving race, color and religion in this matter is purely superficial. Why? Look up the quran. I'm quiet sure that Ali was given those two chances as well. He just has to reflect on his past and figure out who. So in Ali's view, who were the two love of his life?
SUMMARY - The story so far...
Ali has an online, followed by physical love affair with Irrum. Ali finds out he's being 2 or 3 or 4 or 5 or 100 timed by Irrum. Ali then uses her to make himself feel better. Ali also has been going out with gori bebe at the same time??? Irrum seeing loadsa different ppl, loves to test drive.
Ali reluctantly marries Irrum, they are happy for a while, have a kid named Ayesha. Enter Mother in law from hell. Marriage takes a nosedive. Irrum splits, has affair with Alis friend Imran.
Ali starts on-line > physicalish affair with Rohi. Still hankers after Irrum, who still hankers after marries / separates from strange men. Ali marries Lubna (the person he was originally gonna marry b4 Irrum?). Ok for 4 months. Enter Mother-in-law from hell...
...CAN U C WHERE THIS IS GOING?????? I dont think theres actually a point to it. Ali is sad and I dont know why ppl think he is an angel. it takes 2 to tango.