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becoming a Bollywood story...
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nobody noticed but hes written that ali put a diamond engagement ring on aisha 's hand ? that is a mistake rite otherwise this story becums more vile than it actually is , theres cheating , adultery and now incest (well nt really but u never knw with this .... ! hahahahhaha
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yeah should the ring be on lubna's hand..is aisha the real name? hehe
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i think he mentioned that since he has changed the real names he someitmes gets confused abt what name he used where.
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This Ali character is a jerk.
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Name one person in the story, except the lil daughter ayesha, who isnt a jerk? 
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^ The rest of em are plain dumb
They make the marriage choices and then hesitate 
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nobody noticed but hes written that ali put a diamond engagement ring on aisha 's hand ? that is a mistake rite otherwise this story becums ....
Good catch mizzrani. I have made the correction to change the name from Ayesha to Lubna.
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^^ proly too many things r happening at the same time n u dont know how to end this story!! i think u can just end it in the next episode by writing Ali got married'n lived happily ever after.
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this is getting so interesting... was worth waiting! best part so far! cant wait for the next section..!!
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im waiting for the next part..i hpe u r posting one tonight..
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I feel like banging my head on wall 
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i bet lubna will start acting up with him once she is married and with him, maybe she is marrying him for greencard? and in the end he marries rohi?
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Btw what is so special about Ali that everygirl wants to have someone like ‘‘him’’
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^ i kno eh
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This Ali character is a jerk.
Agreed. He's the stereotypical, desi fob mama's boy, who's completely badmash, but thinks he's innocent and blameless. "Wal khubsay, wal khabeesay." Irum was indeed his perfect match.
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theres gotta be something about him.. seems like he has a very charming personality.. maybe hes a ladies man..something thats makes him magnetic.
before anyone jumps on me let me clarify what i mean by “charming”.. those 3 girls most probably didnt view him like we ve.. we have alot more knowldge about his habbits, his characteristics, to them he probably came across as he wanted to present himself. Like most individuals he too had many insecurities but like all of us he is also very good at hiding his dark side, insecurities, weaknesses, etc.
mr. jadugar have u seen or met Irum? is irum really attractive? is she above average? im assuming she is but just want to make sure.
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Roshni, I have met pretty much all the characters of this story but not all of them know that I am writing about them. Everybody have his/her own ways of finding people attractive or beautiful but to me both Irrum and Ali are above average. As per my information, Rohi was above Irrum in looks. And the other Afghani girl who was in the proposal for Ali after his divorce was above all. Lubna is an average girl too.
I was considering putting pictures of most of the characters at the end of the story but I think that can be very unethical. I can be 100% sure that some of the characters will come to know about the story if I post all the pictures I have collected. Moreover, only one character is aware of the fact that I am writing this story. Sometimes, I also think if I am doing something wrong by doing this.
I would ask fellow guppies to kindly comment on this issue? Is it unethical on my part to write a true story about others without their knowledge? As I said only one character is aware and have given me permission to do so. I have tried to change most of the names and locations but if any of the character reads this story can know right away that it's their story.
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People write biographies of other people all the time, and sometimes they are not even authorised. So long as it is your work, its ok. Besides it's too late to be having second thoughts when we have read half of the story already.
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Given that it's anonymous, I think it's okay. I would avoid photographs or details that would help readers identify the actual people.