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oh arzoo sounds like a teenager..and desi romeo..a tharkee uncle
wuahahahah aarzoo is a 19/20 year old girl and desi romeo a 22/23 year old one;)
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just the fact tht his name/nick is desi romeo..i am already disliking him
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the nicks are also fake;)
but the next part will be posted in minutes 
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The chatting sessions kept getting longer and longer, but he never asked her phone number again, he mailed her from work to ask what time she would be online, she had a mail service on her blackberry so every half hour her phone gave her the mails. She replied him back what time she would be online. It was Wednesday and she was with friends, she mailed him a time when she would be online, but she totally forgot the time. Back home she logged in and saw his offline message, and a mail, he went to the beach with friends he told her, it was almost 10pm! She mailed her reply and shut down her laptop. He was the reason she went online she realised, and that wasn’t a good thing, she wanted to know what to do. She took a bag of chips and sat on the sofa watched a movie, or acted like watching, cauz this time her mind was three years back…
Aarzoo was at that time on high school and like I mentioned in the beginning she was a peoples person, she was to impulsive sometimes and every one warned her for that. Aarzoo had a msn at that time with her “friend” Atia. Atia did know the password and added him. Without telling Aarzoo a word about it! Aarzoo went online he immediately asked who she was and why she added him. She asked him the same thing, how did he came in her msn? She didn’t added him and if he also didn’t who did? She asked Atia about it, Atia smiled and said that she was the one who added him! Aarzoo was a little bit pissed about it but not so much, if Atia wanted to use her msn she could do that cauz that msn add was full of “rubbish” every time Aarzoo logged on that msn she blocked him, she didn’t knew him and wasn’t interested doing that. One day she forgot blocking him, he asked her to show her picture, she didn’t showed it. He asked her phone number that was the limit for her. She asked him why he wanted so much of her, he wanted to get to know her better he replied. That was the reason why she added her he said. Aarzoo blocked him and called Atia and asked her for explanation. Atia hang up a story and said sorry to Aarzoo, she asked if she could get the number of Aarzoo’s sim she didn’t use often. Aarzoo asked why she wanted that. Atia replied with I want to talk to him and explain who she really was. Aarzoo didn’t gave the number. Next day at school Atia asked it again, she almost cried, she really liked Kabeer and wanted to explain why she did all this. Aarzoo gave her the second number to her and he called her on Aarzoo’s number. Atia didn’t gave him an explanation why she did all this. Aarzoo asked why she didn’t Atia replied: I will do that really soon believe me. She gave Aarzoo her sim back and Aarzoo put the sim in her fone (what she used only as alarm) and the phone calls started. He called her private, she didn’t picked up cause no one had that number accept him....
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3 years ago?
i thought it was motnhs?
and she already had desi romeo from before like when she was in high school???
This is already confusing!
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3 years ago?
i thought it was motnhs?
and she already had desi romeo from before like when she was in high school???
This is already confusing!
no there is an flash back in the story that happend three year ago..... tht will explain to you how she knows desi romeo
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part 3
It was almost 1pm and they still where in class, Aarzoo’s mobile rang it was Kabeer, Atia was by the teacher, so Aarzoo picked up, he said where are you? And when are you coming? I’m at school will be there in 15 minutes. And she hang up. It was the first time she heard his voice and he hers. He should recognize her voice, he should know that it wasn’t Atia but he didn’t. that gave Aarzoo a bad feeling, he wasn’t interested in her friend, he just wanted to see who added him and who was after all this. Aarzoo wanted to talk with Atia but Atia didn’t listen. She took Aarzoo by the arm and pulled her with her. Aarzoo couldn’t let her friend go alone and she also didn’t wanted to go with her. She was in a dilemma again. But she did go with her.
When both arrived at the location she called him. He asked her where she was. I’m just coming she said. But they where there already there so she didn’t really understood what Atia wanted to do now. She heard her asking where he was, he said he was at the location, but didn’t saw her. Suddenly Aarzoo stopped walking she saw a boy on the pfone walking left right and looking around, she looked back to see where Atia was and saw that her friend was kind of hiding behind a pillar. All this was making Aarzoo angry. Atia hang up the phone and went to Aarzoo. Aarzoo asked her what she was doing and why she was hiding for Kabeer. I don’t have the courage Atia said. Aarzoo took the hand of Atia and went Kabeer’s direction. Atia walked suddenly behind Aarzoo. Kabeer went up their direction, Aarzoo could swear that he smiled their direction, she thought it was because he recognized her friend. So she slowed a little bit and turned back to Atia, but Atia was over the phone again she pretended that she was calling some one. Kabeer also turned back and looked to Aarzoo and walked away. Aarzoo was walking angry away. She had enough of the stupid game Atia was playing she took the phone from the hand of Atia and start getting angry at her
She made Atia call Kabeer, he asked her where she was, Atia said I saw you and now I’m walking back! Kabeer got angry he hang up. Aarzoo got white of anger, she wanted to slap Atia in the face, what the hell wanted Atia to do? why she was lying al the time to Kabeer? If she really liked him she would tell him the truth so why didn’t she. Atia wanted to make a call from Aarzoo’s phone, one last call. Aarzoo decided to give her the fone one last time, it was her friend so she had to help her. Atia asked Kabeer to come back and meet her, he didn’t wanted that, he wa on his way to Uni , he asked her to come there, she didn’t wanted that. Suddenly she said u have seen me, Kabeer asked who she was, she described Aarzoo and herself. He remembered, she said yes the girl in front (Aarzoo) that was me. Aarzoo turned really pissed her way and slapped Atia in public in her face and took the phone and destroyed the sim. It was over, her friendship with Atia was over, her so called friend miss used her kindness, she had broken her trust and most off all she had contact with some boy she didn’t know, and told that guy that she was Aarzoo! Atia and Aarzoo went both there own ways, at the end of college year Atia said sorry to Aarzoo and wanted to make it up, but Aarzoo didn’t trust her anymore, she was still afraid to see Kabeer again, she didn’t wanted that to happen, but it happened. She saw him at the corner of her street, she ignored him but she could swear he was looking at her. Aarzoo decided to end everything, her contact with Atia, she made a new msn, took a new number, and made a fresh start….
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
and now that SHE'S in uni....HE saw her myspace and recognised her....ahhh I get it now
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
and now that SHE'S in uni....HE saw her myspace and recognised her....ahhh I get it now
exactly!!! except the fact that he recognized her ;) he didn't but that will be in the next part inshallah i think i will post it tomorrow,
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ooooo
goood 
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You are very active triple K. Why don't you just write all the story before the end of the weekend. I don't like suspence.
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quite interesting... keep posting ...
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i can’t complete it in one weekend 
i posted those so fast cause else there would be to much confusion
lkin i’ll try to post 1 or 2 long parts a day
@ safoon thnx
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hi kkk, nice story keep it up :-) jus please make sure it doesnt drag on for ages. xx
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hi kkk, nice story keep it up :-) jus please make sure it doesnt drag on for ages. xx
heey aniiisa thnx, no it won't i'm tryin to post as much as i can on a day, and keep it short....
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Some times it gets too confusing. Try not to put in too much detail. Keep it at little higher level to get an over all idea :)
Thanks KMK :)
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“Aarzoo the movie has end” these words brought her back to reality. She took her stuff and went to her bedroom to sleep. It was almost 1am and she had an mail, she opened it, it was Kabeer’s he was back, and drunk to much energy drink so he couldn’t sleep he asked her what time she would be online. Aarzoo didn’t replied back she just went to bed with a smile on her face. This never happened with her, no one had mailed her so late in the night, especially not when the other person just got back from outside.
She mailed him from work what time she would be online, and he mailed her back that it shouldn’t be Pakistani time but normal time (Pakistani’s are always late at everything) she smiled but didn’t replied. She never putted her pictures on msn, not when he was online, se was still afraid for what if he does recognize her, she wasn’t changed that much. She decided to put it on her display. He asked her who it was on the display she answered that it was she, he didn’t said anything about it, he didn’t mentioned that he ever saw her, or some thing. That gave Aarzoo a bit courage. She could put her pictures on the display.
A few months passed away, he still didn’t asked her number and that was a relieve. She hated when some one kept hammering on a subject and Kabeer didn’t . Now she began to like the way he was. It was a totally different person then three years ago, but may be that was because the situation was different.
Uni started en Aarzoo focused more and more at school. She spoke Kabeer almost every day. He left her a not every day, and every one in the friend lists of both wanted to know hoe it really was, what the relation of both of them really was. Both ignored everything, they where just friends not more not less. At least for Aarzoo it was…..
Her parents went to Pakistan for family visit, she was home with her sister and brother. What time are u starting tomorrow? He asked her. I won’t tell u she replied, she started late and he didn’t like that. And she liked it when he was a bit annoyed, the way he reacted, the way he talked, everything. I will wake u up he said. Aarzoo laughed. She wished him best off luck cause she wouldn’t wake up by him, he didn’t had her number and if he had she didn’t woke up from a alarm how should some one wake her up. How do want to do that she asked, you are a cheater he replied. Aarzoo didn’t got it, hw was she a cheater she didn’t do anything, she asked him what he meant, he replied: u don’t give me any sources to wake u up you’re a cheater. I ain’t she replied. That night she didn’t know what she had in mind she gave her number to him. It was a number what would be out of air in 1 day, so if he would miss use it, then it wouldn’t be so terrible. She knew him so long now and he didn’t gave her a bad feeling. In a impulsive moment she gave her number to him, and told him not to call private cause she didn’t answered private number. No I wont I will wake u up at 8 o clock when I will be up. Aarzoo agreed, she would be up already cause she had to make breakfast for Farhan, her sister Riffat would be at work at the time.
It was 8.10am she was a bit nervous, Farhan went just for work and she was cleaning up the kitchen. After 20 minutes she would leave for uni. She heard her ringtone, and saw a unknown number. She picked up with Aarzoo, selaamalaikum the other side replied, his voice was sleepy and she heard some noise like water or something. Walaikumassalaam she replied, how are you? Aarzoo was quite active in the morning and he wasn’t, they talked a few minutes, she asked what he was doing “brushing my teeth” he replied, she laughed loud and made a and to the call, she had to leave for Uni. I speak you inshallah soon he replied, and both hang up.
She was on station, her train was coming. Sanam messaged her that she was already at school, and she will see Aarzoo there. She heard her phone again, it was a private number. No one called her private, who was this? She picked up with yes? It was Kabeer. Why are you calling private? She asked him why hi was calling private. “Owh it’s automatically I didn’t changed the settings of my phone he replied. He had to be at 9am at work but he was late he said. After 5 minutes Aarzoo decided to make an and to the call by saying my friend is here I have to go. He said okay and again he promised to call her inshallah soon.
She was almost arrived at Uni and called Sanam to ask her where she was, during the call she also received a message, she didn’t read the message she would do that later. Finally in class Sanam and Aarzoo where paying attention to the lesson, and Aarzoo decided to see who had send her a message so soon in the morning, it was Kabeer! She didn’t replied back it wasn’t necessary for her, Aarzoo passed her phone to Sanam and let her read the message. Should I reply back she asked? Sanam read the message again he said, “U have cheated again, u where already up, i realise now that no one can be so active in the morning, I arrived work, are u at Uni already?” the teacher was looking at them Sanam wrote on a paper that she could reply him but after a few minutes not now. While Aarzoo read what Sanam wrote her phone went. It was Kabeer!! that was really soon it was just 10am, she didn’t picked up, he called again, she ignored it again, and he called again she messaged him to call later she was in class and asked him not to call private. He called her at 11am again. She got angry cause he was calling private again. He said he was testing out if she would pick the phone or not. they talked about 15 minutes and Aarzoo had to hang up cause Sanam called her.
Aarzoo was home at 5pm, she plugged her phone on the charger. Riffat made dinner already, both ate and talked about their day, Aarzoo didn’t said a word about Kabeer. she decided to make a call to her mum and picked her mobile and saw a few miss calls, and a message, it was Kabeer again, he asked why she didn’t pick up her phone. She replied with the question what the other number was, and told him that she was at home and couldn’t talk with him. It was his work number and she should use it only in emergency’s
The chat sessions kept getting loner and longer and the calls to, he called her in the morning, when he left for work, and talked for hours with her, he was late for work, and said that it was okay. She was at that time at school, or on way to school. He called her every minute he went out for work. He had several meetings on a day with other companies and every time he left office and he started to go earlier every day and when he was done with the appointment. It was so dramatic that everyone asked Aarzoo why she called so much.....
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could u please change the colour of the story to another colour .. maybe blue ! will start reading soon.. and dont forget to add
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Please could you put all the speech into speech marks "..." because it makes it easier to read and maybe use spell check.
Otherwise it was a good addition.
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ooohhh its getting good