NAZM: tu mire dard ke sholoN meiN pighal jaaye gi!!!

poet · April 6, 2002, 4:42pm

mera jis aag ki hiddat se sulagta hai badan
woh tiri marmareeN baahoN se na bujh paaye gi!
mere seene meiN jo aazaar pala karte heiN
teri zulfoN se kahaaN un ka madawa ho ga?

tum zara apne shabistaaN se nikal kar dekho
har taraf khoon ki barsaat lagi rehti hai
bazm-e-yaaraaN se bhi baahar kabhi aa kar dekho
kitna atraaf meiN kohraam bapaa rehta hai

kis tarha bhook se rote hue nannhe bachche
apni maaoN ke kaleje ko jala dete haiN
chaar sikkoN ke iwaz baap ki nannhi laRki
kese ajdaad ki meeraas ko bechch aati hai

kese taaghoot ke panjoN meiN phaNsi hai ummat
hukmraaN sar pe musallat haiN hamaare kese
kese behta hai falasteen meiN bachchoN ka lahoo
kese kashmir ke waadi meiN basa hai baarood
kese baghdaad ki galioN meiN sisakti hai hayaat!

yeh bhi haiN aur kaii in se masaail haiN yahaaN
jin se muNh moR ke maiN jee naheeN sakta jaanaaN
haaN yehi soz yehi aag mira sarmaaya hai
maiN inhi khaak~nasheenoN meiN pala hooN jaanaaN

yehi behtar hai ke tu raah badal le apni
is qadar soz kahaaN dil meiN samaaye ga tire?
tu jo is aag ko choole gi to jal jaaye gi
tu mire dard ke sholoN meiN pighal jaaye gi!!!

Shoaib

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_kashish · April 6, 2002, 6:24pm

Nice one poet ji.....who is it by?

poet · April 8, 2002, 7:11pm

Thank you very much kashish saahiba.

This is by yours truly.

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Nice one poet ji.....who is it by?
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Ek_Shairah · April 9, 2002, 4:16pm

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How nice and true!!

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m_isabah · April 9, 2002, 4:21pm

.. mashallah .. you have quite a style of writing .. thank you

:)

hope to read some more of your work !

To see a world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold affinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour

_Maha_1 · April 10, 2002, 3:54pm

very nice ..Poet !
beautiful style indeed.

keep it up !

~~ * Maha * ~~

Dhoop · April 10, 2002, 6:24pm

great work

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it’s a beautiful piece…
keep’em coming…

Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…

Perfectionist · April 10, 2002, 6:44pm

Excellent poem. Poet jee I appreciate ur feelings

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Sehar · April 10, 2002, 7:44pm

It's extordinary. Beautiful.

poet · April 11, 2002, 2:29pm

Thank you for your appreciation.

Unfortunately it’s true. It’s amazing that the more things change, the more they remain the same.

Shoaib

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poet · April 11, 2002, 2:31pm

Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.

I have, in the past, posted tons of my ghazals here:) I will try to post something new soon.

Shoaib

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Originally posted by m_isabah:
**.. mashallah .. you have quite a style of writing .. thank you

:)

hope to read some more of your work !

**
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poet · April 11, 2002, 2:48pm

I am thankful to you all for positive feedback and encouragement. It helps keep the flame burning:)

Thank you so very much!

Shoaib

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Originally posted by ~Maha~:
very nice ..Poet** !
beautiful style indeed.

keep it up !

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speed_master · April 12, 2002, 12:03pm

So Nice ....

Shaam-e-Firaq · April 12, 2002, 12:25pm

Mashallah Buhat Umda Poetry....

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"If you belong to Allah, rest assured that Allah will indeed belong to you"
"Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today"
"The best way to cheer yourself up is to try to cheer somebody else up."
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juMurA · April 12, 2002, 2:24pm

Zabardast

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MARRIED_NY · April 12, 2002, 2:29pm

,kis tarha bhook se rote hue nannhe bachche
apni maaoN ke kaleje ko jala dete haiN BOHAT DARD HAI APP ki ghazal mai.bohat khub likha hai app nay.

Rameesha · April 12, 2002, 5:42pm

buhat khoob.. keep it up poet sahib..

anar_kali · April 13, 2002, 8:25pm

bohat hi khoobsurat dil main utarne wala andaz hai

Maheen2002 · April 13, 2002, 8:36pm

beautiful…verynice.

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—~—Maria—~—
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

poet · April 15, 2002, 3:32pm

Thank you for encouragement. With such positive feedback from so many friends, I sure would keep 'em coming

Shoaib

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