Asalam u Alaikum !
How are you all ? Hope Fine ! So I am starting this competition thread for nazam of week!
Rules:
Post Only One Nazam
Competition Starts On Saturday 3rd July 00:01 Am (PST)
Competition Ends On Saturday 10th July 00:01 Am (PST)
Winner will be decided by voting in the poll
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I will participate :)
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Yeah sure you are most welcome :)
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Hum banjaray, Dil walay hein
Aur Penth mein Deray daaley hein
Tum Dhooka Denay wali ho!
Hum Dhooka Khaney walay hein.
Is mein to nahee sharmaoo gee ?
Kya Dhooka denay Aaoo ge ?
Sub maal Nikalo, Lay Aaoo
Aey basti walo, Lay Aaoo
Yeh Tun ka jhoota jadoo bhe
Yeh man ki Jhooti Khushboo Bhe
Yeh Taal banatey Aansoo bhe
Yeh jaal Bichatay gaisoo bhe
Yeh larzish doltey seenay ke
Par sach nahee boltey seenay ke
Yeh Hoont bhe, Hum se kya chooree
Kia Sach much Jhootey hein Goree ?
In ramzoon mein in ghatoon mein
In wadoon mein in Batoon mein
Kuch Khoat Haqeeqat ka to Nahee ?
Kuch mail Sadaqat ka to Nahee ?
Yeh saray Dhookay lay Aaoo
Kuch Pyarey Dhookay Ley Aaoo
Kyun Rakhoo Khud sey door hamein
Jo Naam Kahoo Manzoor hamein
In kanch key matkoon key badlay
Han bolo gorri kya lo gee ?
Tum Eik jahan ke Ashrafeeyan ?
Ya Dil aur jaan ke Ashrafeeyan ?
Re: Nazam Of The Week Competition
Mujhe nazam aur shair ka difference nahin pata so if I post something wrong mujhe bata dena plz 
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goood thinking ..... acha tell me one things app kisi ki poem b post kr skte hai .. ya it should b your own poetry ??
in either case inshallah i will post laterz from home ....thumbs up
okay !
goood thinking ..... acha tell me one things app kisi ki poem b post kr skte hai .. ya it should b your own poetry ??
in either case inshallah i will post laterz from home ....thumbs up
it must be a intikhaab :) not your own poetry
Re: Nazam Of The Week Competition
Asalam u Alaikum ! How are you all ? Hope Fine ! So I am starting this competition thread for nazam of week!
Rules:
Post Only One Nazam Competition Starts On Saturday 3rd July 00:01 Am (PST) Competition Ends On Saturday 10th July 00:01 Am (PST) Winner will be decided by voting in the poll
and what the winner will get??
and what the winner will get??
The winner will get a tag of 'Winner of Nazam Competition'
:p
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^:hehe:
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being lonely plz tell about the language(urdu,english) of poetry and also that whether it has to be a new one or we can also post the one that has been posted before too?
being lonely plz tell about the language(urdu,english) of poetry and also that whether it has to be a new one or we can also post the one that has been posted before too?
Aap kuch karo tu sahi post ... humein intezaar hai ...
yeah but itz written, u can post only once, so am asking all the rules before..
Re: Nazam Of The Week Competition
I think its clearly mentioned by BL ...
Post Only One Nazam
being lonely plz tell about the language(urdu,english) of poetry and also that whether it has to be a new one or we can also post the one that has been posted before too?
You can post only one urdu nazam for competition and you can post any nazam you want but it should be intikhaab no matter you posted it before or not.Regards
Kabhi phir milein gay tu pochhna
Abhi kya kahein, abhi kya sunnein
Kay sar-e-faseel sakoot-e-jaan
Kuff-e-roz-o-shab pay sharur numma
Voh jo hurf hurf chiraag tha
Ussay kiss hava nay bujha diya
Kabhi labb hillein gay tu pochhna
Sar-e-sahaara-e-ahd-e-visaal-e-dil
Voh jo nikhaton ka hojoom tha
Ussay dashat-e-mouj-e-firaaq nay
Tah-e-khaak tab say milla diya
Kabhi gull khillein gay tu pochhna
Abhi kya kahein abhi kya sunein?
Yonhi khawahishon kay hisaar mein
Kabhi be-sabab, kabhi be-khalull
Kahan kon kiss say bichherr gaya
Kissay kis nay kaisay ganva diya
*Kabhi phir milein gay tu pochhna *
Bahut umdaah … :k:
Good to see something moving on in this thread as well …
Indeed a good choice and welcome to GS …