Naye Qafiye Radeef Kahan Sey Layein

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Faixan January 9, 2011, 8:53pm 1

Naye Qafiye Radeef Kahan Sey Layein
Lafzoon K Naye Hareef Kahan Sey Layein

Na Sanum Badley, Na Janoon e ishq badla
Husn ki Nayi Tareef Kahan Sey Layein

Na “Mir” Hein Na “Ghalib” ki roh hi zinda
Rabt ko Sabab e Khafeef Kahan Sey Layein

Shahoun ki Mehfilein na Umrao k raqs
Adab ki wesi tasneef Kahan Sey Layein

Tehzeeb so rahi hei jab kafn Ordh k
dil mei ehsas e lateef Kahan Sey Layein

Sir-Shari-e-Khudi mei woh “Iqbal” ka Shikwa
Woh himatein hum Naheef Kahan Sey Layein

Amarbail January 9, 2011, 8:59pm 2

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Kahana se layain … Kahaan se layain … Kahaan se layain …

Wah wah, bahut khoob …
Mein Amal se pooch kar bataunga ke yeh sab kuch aap ko kahaan se milega …

btw, good one and thanks for sharing … :k:

Faixan January 9, 2011, 9:07pm 3

Re: Naye Qafiye Radeef Kahan Sey Layein

Un Sey Sab apni apni kehtey hein
mera matlab ada karey koi ;d

Shukriya Janab…

Jee mei intazar karoun ga
kahin Habib Jalib wala haal na ho jaye k…

“Wada Shikan ko dekhtey Wakt e Saher hoa” =P

Sheal January 9, 2011, 9:10pm 4

Re: Naye Qafiye Radeef Kahan Sey Layein

Amal kia pehlay isi business main tha

nice sharing :k:

Shab-e-Hijar January 9, 2011, 9:42pm 5

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very nice sharing :k:

Amal January 10, 2011, 1:39am 6

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Faixan bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey. Khaasi mukhtalif k: … thanx for sharing it with us

Amal January 10, 2011, 1:40am 7

Re: Naye Qafiye Radeef Kahan Sey Layein

Ji, lekin ab: “Jo beich’tey the dawa-e-dil…wo dukaan apni barrhaa gaey” Ab ye na poochye ga kahaaN gaey?

Amal January 10, 2011, 1:42am 8

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Kuch naye ki zaroorat nahi hey Arif aur Faixan… wo gana to suna ho ga aap logoN ne:

SadyoN sey dunya meiN
aek hi to qissa hey
aek hi to larrki hey
aek hi to larrka hey

… jab kirdaar sadyoN puraaney heiN, to naey qaafye aur radeef ki kya zaroorat hey?

UZ January 10, 2011, 5:18am 9

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aajkal shairi naa paid hoti jaa rahi aap ne aajkal ke shairon kaa bohat alaa naqsha kheencha hai :k:

UZ January 10, 2011, 5:20am 10

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zaroorat hai naa ab koii cyber heer and cyber ranjha majnoon kaa kissa hona chaiye aise hi jaise hawaii ishq ke naam sey

Amal January 10, 2011, 2:56pm 11

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Qissey to bohat heiN...har teesra aadmi ranjha hey aur har doosri larrki heer ... :)

fara January 10, 2011, 3:18pm 12

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Mujhay lagga yeh kisi mazloom shair ka pur-zoor ehtajaj hay... koi uskay tamam qafiyee aur radeef lay bhaga hay aur woh GS per aa ker shikayat ker raha hay...

Amarbail January 10, 2011, 4:05pm 13

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wah wah ... kya kehnay ... dil jeet leya badhshaoo .... Thand paa ditti jay kalejay ich :D

UZ January 10, 2011, 4:41pm 14

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oh heer rajhnay nahi honday :poh khuch aur hi hotay hain

Amal January 10, 2011, 4:59pm 15

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Ji, koi dukhi aatma hi hey shaed…shaer to be’chaara peidaaeshi dukhi hota hey

Amal January 10, 2011, 5:00pm 16

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Aadhi punjabi, aadhi Urdu…kya biryaani banaai hey aap ney Arif, lagta hey hameiN malyalam meiN baat karni parrey gi

Amarbail January 10, 2011, 8:05pm 17

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U mean UZ is malyali ?

Amal January 10, 2011, 8:12pm 18

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I did not say that :nono: UZ ko malwari ka pata chal gaya to aap apni kheir manana

Amarbail January 10, 2011, 8:19pm 19

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Yeh tau baja irshaad farmaaya aap ne, chalain UZ se maafi ke talabgaar hain hum ...

UZ January 11, 2011, 2:29am 20

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malyalam mujhe her giz nahi pata magar malwaari kaya hota hai