Nainon se lakeer ashkoon ki ban jati hai
Jab mujhe yaad tumhari aati hai…
Mohabbat main kyun hajar ka mosam muntazir hota hai
Kia soochte hain hum.. kaisi taqdeer ban jati hai
Main Chand ko dekhti hon.. teri yaad bhulane ko
Magar Chand main teri tasveer nazar aati hai…
Re: ~Nainon se~
'' jidhar daikhoon teri tasveer nazar aatee hay''
nice effort mooni
Re: ~Nainon se~
lovely :) keep it up
Re: ~Nainon se~
Main Chand ko dekhti hon.. teri yaad bhulane ko
Magar Chand main teri tasveer nazar aati hai…
wow!!! very nice :k:
Re: ~Nainon se~
very nice effort keep writing :k:
Re: ~Nainon se~
beautiful poetry
aisa hota to bhi theik tha
main chand ko dekhti hoon..teri yaad bhulaney ko
magar chand main bhi teri tasveer ban jaati hai
Re: ~Nainon se~
Mohabbat main kyun hajar ka mosam muntazir hota hai
Kia soochte hain hum.. kaisi taqdeer ban jati hai
beautiful...
Re: ~Nainon se~
acha start hai...
asaatza ka kalaam parhain to paband shaairi kay tarz-o-qawaneen ka behtar andaaza ho jaai ga. agar asaatza ka kalaam mushqil lagay to nai shu'araa ka parhin.
Re: ~Nainon se~
very nice dear :)
Re: ~Nainon se~
Kia soochte hain hum.. kaisi taqdeer ban jati hai
nice :)
Re: ~Nainon se~
beautiful poetry aisa hota to bhi theik tha main chand ko dekhti hoon..teri yaad bhulaney ko magar chand main bhi teri tasveer ban jaati hai
ya.. rite..:)
anyways.. thx 4 liking
Re: ~Nainon se~
thx..
thx.. alot!
thank u sooo much…
Re: ~Nainon se~
thx everyone.. :)
Re: ~Nainon se~
Again a beautiful piece.
Wonderful effort :k:
keep it up!
Re: ~Nainon se~
Wah!
Even I liked it, who reads poetry from 100 yards
Re: ~Nainon se~
awesome its really nice