Nah Ho BudGumaan Kah Badal Gia Hoon Main
Tujh Bin Pathar Ka Ho Gia Hoon Main**
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nice...
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*thx mysterious woman ....... i alwaz like to post my poetry with image but i don't know WHY GS put restriction on me to insert images ....... *
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nice
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*thx DS ....... *
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Nice sheir and image Sannan :k:
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Thx Amal for liking my poetry *and IMAGE *..............
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very good sannan as ususal u r again with a nice piece of of cool image ...... keep sharing
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i dont like the image .... koi aur image use kareiN aur font bhi :-)
but sheir is very good:-)
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**Thx Gypsy …
Gul G thx for liking poetry and abt image itni mushkil say banaya tha image 
anyway ur suggestion has been noted down …**
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nice shair aur image bhi......!
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Nah Ho BudGumaan Kah Badal Gia Hoon Main Tujh Bin Pathar Ka Ho Gia Hoon Main**
That people don't see
I am the suspect,
I have now
Changed myself.
Without you,
I'm like a stone.
Or
That you don't be jealous
I have now
Changed myself.
Without you,
I have become a stone.
Or
That you don't suspect me
I have now
Changed myself.
Without you,
I have become a stone.
Note: Sannan and others, please comment on the accuracy of the translation. Thanks
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wah sannan jee nice words
usko kehna k main tera ab bhi intezar karti hoon
na chahtey hoey bhi din raat tujhey he yaad karti hoon
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nice shair aur image bhi......!
thank you reet g .... i came here after many days and stopped to give you reply .....
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That people don't see I am the suspect, I have now Changed myself.
Without you, I'm like a stone.
Or
That you don't be jealous I have now Changed myself.
Without you, I have become a stone.
Or
That you don't suspect me I have now Changed myself.
Without you, I have become a stone.
Note: Sannan and others, please comment on the accuracy of the translation. Thanks
**Nice effort rkopra but its hard to translate poetry from urdu to English or English to urdu as only poet or some peoples who have gr8 taste can do this … anyway nice effort and for the second one you are right but in my point of view which I want to say …..
Don’t be Suspicious that I’ve got changed
I’ve become Stone, without you
Here I’m using stone in sense that someone who couldn’t move himself ….. **
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wah sannan jee nice words usko kehna k main tera ab bhi intezar karti hoon na chahtey hoey bhi din raat tujhey he yaad karti hoon
*buhat shukaria Izzat Afzai ka aur aap ka fill Bade' she'r ka jawab naheen ......... aur jub mujhay iss kay muqabalay ka she'r yaad aaya to zaroor share karoon ga ...... *
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thanks sannan jee fill Bade' she'r this means
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Sannan, thank you. I have posted the revised version at http://whitewings.sulekha.com/blog/post/2007/04/i-ve-become-like-a-stone.htm
Nah Ho BudGumaan Kah Badal Gia Hoon Main
Tujh Bin Pathar Ka Ho Gia Hoon Main
Don’t be suspicious, my dear
Now I’m not the same.
I’ve turned into a stone,
Without you.
-translated by Ravi Kopra
(revised after Sannan’s response at paklinks.com)
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Please tell him
I still wait for him.
Unaware, I still
Day and night remember him.
http://whitewings.sulekha.com/blog/post/2007/04/please-tell-him-urdu-poetry-in-translation.htm