~**~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~**~

[Sannan]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

@rkopra

Sannan, thank you. I have posted the revised version at http://whitewings.sulekha.com/blog/post/2007/04/i-ve-become-like-a-stone.htm

Nah Ho BudGumaan Kah Badal Gia Hoon Main
Tujh Bin Pathar Ka Ho Gia Hoon Main

---

Don’t be suspicious, my dear
Now I’m not the same.
I’ve turned into a stone,
Without you.

-translated by Ravi Kopra
(revised after Sannan’s response at paklinks.com)

**The second one " I’ve turned into a stone, without you" is simply awesome this is the exact feeling which i felt …

but for the first one still :bummer:

I think u r not understanding the things which i’m saying Actually that is very necessary in the sens “Kah” hope you’ll try to re-write first she’r again …

**

[rkopra]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

@Sannan

**The second one " I’ve turned into a stone, without you" is simply awesome this is the exact feeling which i felt …

but for the first one still

I think u r not understanding the things which i’m saying Actually that is very necessary in the sens “Kah” hope you’ll try to re-write first she’r again …

**

Thanks again, Sannan. How about:

Don’t be wary
that I’m now changed.

I’ve turned into a stone,
without you.

[Sannan]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

@rkopra

Thanks again, Sannan. How about:

Don’t be wary
that I’m now changed.

I’ve turned into a stone,
without you.

that’s it

[Addie]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

nice

[maha_cutest]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

simply awesome ... i came here after many days and thoughts and your cute poetry with cool image was there ..........

[goodnews]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

@Sannan

Zabardast

[Asifk7]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

Buhat hi khub Sannan :biggthumb

[Sannan]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

aaaj ek sadi kay baad idhar aana naseeb howa ........ daikhta hoon kah puranay sathi bichar gaiy kah uss he tarah chahchahtay phir rahay hain ......

[tahreem_saeed]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

sanna bhai aaap kahan they itney din or aap ko kiya laga k puraney saathi hein yah nahi i think sab yahan hein koi nahi gaya or aap ko yaad bhi kartey hein sab plz come back

[Saqi_the_angel]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

@rkopra

That you don't suspect me I have now Changed myself.

Without you, I have become a stone.

Note: Sannan and others, please comment on the accuracy of the translation. Thanks

That you don't suspect me
I have changed.

Without you,
I have become a stone.

it sounds odd I and myself, can't use both, I might be wrong. I think there is another word for BudGumaan. Will get back to you......

Very good translation, especially very rarely you loose the meaning.

thanks for sharing

[Saqi_the_angel]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

wah sannan jee nice words usko kehna k main tera ab bhi intezar karti hoon na chahtey hoey bhi din raat tujhey he yaad karti hoon

Tahreem,

Bhaut khoobsurat jawab ahi..

[Sannan]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

sanna bhai aaap kahan they itney din or aap ko kiya laga k puraney saathi hein yah nahi i think sab yahan hein koi nahi gaya or aap ko yaad bhi kartey hein sab plz come back

**buhat shukaria tahreem g ..... bus telling you honestly that gupshup main kuch maza naheen raha tha ..... images uploading close ho gai thi waghaira waghaira aur phie mujhay web sites bananay ka shouq hogia tha ..main udhar lag gia ....

anyway, now i'll try my level best to come here ....... c u soon ....**

[tahreem_saeed]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

Tahreem,

Bhaut khoobsurat jawab ahi..

thanks saqi jee

[goodnews]

Re: ~~ Nah Hho BudGuman ~~

sanna bhai aaap kahan they itney din or aap ko kiya laga k puraney saathi hein yah nahi i think sab yahan hein koi nahi gaya or aap ko yaad bhi kartey hein sab plz come back

Mera bhi pur zor israr ky lot ai Sannan ji Ap ky fans intizar main hain:D