na de'aY jalaiN meRi aankh maiN mujhaY itni sakhat saza na daY

NikamiJano · October 3, 2002, 6:36pm

zara dekh chand ki pa’tyooN ne bikhaR bikhaR k tumam shab
teRa naam likha hia ra’ait peR koi lehaR Aa k mita na daY
maiN udasi’aaN na saja sakoon kabi jism-o-jaaN k mizaR peR
na de’aY jalaiN meRi aankh maiN mujhaY itni sakhat saza na daY

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 3, 2002, 6:43pm

Beautiful NJ sis, :)

nikii · October 3, 2002, 8:03pm

bhut khoob :k:

chand_chehra · October 3, 2002, 9:47pm

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bohat hi khubsurat post :k:

_Passionate · October 3, 2002, 10:45pm

zabardast sher nikami…:k:

thanx for posting:flower1:

marinda · October 4, 2002, 7:20am

nice :)
thanx for sharing

Pramod · October 4, 2002, 7:26am

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

zara dekh chand ki pa'tyooN ne bikhaR bikhaR k tumam shab
teRa naam likha hia ra'ait peR koi lehaR Aa k mita na daY
maiN udasi'aaN na saja sakoon kabi jism-o-jaaN k mizaR peR
na de'aY jalaiN meRi aankh maiN mujhaY itni sakhat saza na daY
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na de'aY jalaiN meRi aankh maiN mujhaY itni sakhat saza na daY

wah..kya baat hai.
thanks for sharing it bahana.

Amal · October 4, 2002, 1:09pm

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Beautiful NikamiJi:k:…no word…

ShaRaRa · October 4, 2002, 4:39pm

yup beautiful:k:

NikamiJano · October 5, 2002, 12:15am

thanks G-E-Tea....nikii sis ,&passion...mrinda and Sharara welcome :)

NikamiJano · October 5, 2002, 12:16am

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*Originally posted by Pramod: *

na de'aY jalaiN meRi aankh maiN mujhaY itni sakhat saza na daY

wah..kya baat hai.
thanks for sharing it bahana.
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thansk Pra g...wesay ap gayeb kahan hain...koi new gazal nahi likhi ap ne............:)

NikamiJano · October 5, 2002, 12:18am

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thanks Amal…hmmmm no wording tu isharoon se kaam chala rahya ap ;)…thanks again anyways…aur kafi dino se ap ne kuch nahi likha (bait bazi) k ilawa…

NikamiJano · October 5, 2002, 12:19am

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thanks chando g…

ravish ravish pe hai intzaaR ka mosam
nahi hia koi be moasm-e-bahaR ka moasm

Muddi · October 5, 2002, 1:13am

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

zara dekh chand ki pa'tyooN ne bikhaR bikhaR k tumam shab
teRa naam likha hia ra'ait peR koi lehaR Aa k mita na daY
maiN udasi'aaN na saja sakoon kabi jism-o-jaaN k mizaR peR
na de'aY jalaiN meRi aankh maiN mujhaY itni sakhat saza na daY
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Jub main Roota Tha Mairay Roonay Pay Huss Deetay Thay
Abh Mairee Yaad Main Kyun Ashq Bahanay Aiy
Tum Too Ik Din Mairay Shikway Bhee Na Sun Saktay Thay
Abh Mujhay Kyun Gham-e-Dil Apna Sunanay Aiy

Lovely:)

NikamiJano · October 5, 2002, 6:27pm

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*Originally posted by Muddi: *

Abh Mujhay Kyun Gham-e-Dil Apna Sunanay Aiy

hum ne tu abhi kuch be nahi sunaia

Lovely:)
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Really...........but kon ? ;)

Jaan_Lewaa · October 6, 2002, 12:05am

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bhut achay:k:

Capricorn · October 6, 2002, 3:57pm

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

na de'aY jalaiN meRi aankh maiN mujhaY itni sakhat saza na daY
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naheen naheen aisee koi saza naheen dee ja rahee aap ko....aap shoq se dil aur diye jalatee rahein aankhon aankhon mein ;)

Hum_Hain · October 6, 2002, 5:11pm

nice!

NikamiJano · October 6, 2002, 5:37pm

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but capo ankhin be bata’yen na kis…;)ap he dhondh la do WO ankhin

NikamiJano · October 6, 2002, 5:38pm

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*Originally posted by Hum Hain: *
nice!
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oh ApP be hain thanks.....:)