na de'aY jalaiN meRi aankh maiN mujhaY itni sakhat saza na daY

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Re: Re: Re: na de’aY jalaiN meRi aankh maiN mujhaY itni sakhat saza na daY

theek hai…dhoondta hoon..milte hee email kar doonga:hehe:

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

oh ApP be hain thanks.....:)
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Woh apne liye hain nikiii ;)

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Re: Re: Re: Re: na de’aY jalaiN meRi aankh maiN mujhaY itni sakhat saza na daY

nahi capo ap ka kia aitbaaR k kahin sunny boy ya Naaspeeta ki ankhin utha lao na baba…wesay me already…ahem ahem :wink:

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Really me tu samji K K K K K …:wink: :hehe:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

nahi capo ap ka kia aitbaaR k kahin sunny boy ya Naaspeeta ki ankhin utha lao na baba......wesay me already.....ahem ahem ;)
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Mujhe kia pagal samjha hua hai....apnee hote hue kisee aur???....hmmmm na mumkin;)

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Khabardar jo aisa kuch samjha :2guns:

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nikami jee boht acha shair likha hei :)

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Originally posted by *Masoom Muskaan: *
nikami jee boht acha shair likha hei :)
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thanks mashoom g...........:)

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samjain gain kia kar lo gaye capo..:wink:

aur dekho tu ye jurat NikamiJano k thread main dhandli bandooq k sath…oey capo abhi ap ne APUN ka dosra mashoom roop nahi dekha …dekhay hai kia…kia bolta tu…;):soldier: :smokin2:

(abhi warning)
CHando kahan hain ap dekheiy tu ap ki jano k sath ye salok
:crying: help wala icon pata nahi kahan chala gay kher…itna he kafi

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:rolleyes::rolleyes:

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beautiful verses ...let me post the whole ghazal

Mere dil ki rakh kuraid mat,isay muskura kay hawa na day
Yeh charagh phir bhi charagh hain, kahin taira hath jala na day
Yeh udasian na saja sakon , kabhi jism-o-jan kay mizar par
Na diay jalain meri ankh main mujhay itni sakht saza na day
Naiy dor kay naiy khawab hain , naiy mosmon kay gulab hain
Yeh mohabatoon kay charagh hain, inhain nafraton ki hawa na day
Zara daikh chand ki pation nay bikhar bikhar kay tamam shab
Taira nam likha hay rait par koi lehr aa kar mita na day

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:smack: :crying: :crying:

jin pe takia tha wohi patey hawa dainay lagay…:crying:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by guybrush: *
beautiful verses ...let me post the whole ghazal

Mere dil ki rakh kuraid mat,isay muskura kay hawa na day
Yeh charagh phir bhi charagh hain, kahin taira hath jala na day
Yeh udasian na saja sakon , kabhi jism-o-jan kay mizar par
Na diay jalain meri ankh main mujhay itni sakht saza na day
Naiy dor kay naiy khawab hain , naiy mosmon kay gulab hain
Yeh mohabatoon kay charagh hain, inhain nafraton ki hawa na day
Zara daikh chand ki pation nay bikhar bikhar kay tamam shab
Taira nam likha hay rait par koi lehr aa kar mita na day
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thanks 4 posting .......bus jo sher achay lagya wohi hum ne post kar deay thay

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awwwwwwww ap ko to sardi lug gaye :p:hehe: roiye nahi
hum ** takiye** ki jagha sir rakh datay hain :wink: :Ppatoon par