My poem

queen_24 · September 3, 2012, 5:51pm

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STA ne dhoka khaya hua hay… Phullay ki theli main rakh ke

Kinzz · September 3, 2012, 6:00pm

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Lol
Ab to wohi akay bataye ge :p

queen_24 · September 3, 2012, 6:01pm

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to ajanay do, me koi jhoot thori bol rahi hun

KKF · September 3, 2012, 6:24pm

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'ishq ek mo'amma hai...samajhne kaa na samjhaane kaa
ik aag kaa daryaa hai aur boat meN jaanaa hai! :D

enter10 · November 7, 2012, 5:08pm

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Nice 1

Kya_Karon · November 7, 2012, 5:29pm

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:k:

yousaf_shah · November 8, 2012, 4:26am

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ek aam sa putla hoon miti say bnaya houaa

yun pooj ker meray dost mujh ko khuda na ker'

SHAH G'

Kinzz · November 8, 2012, 4:31am

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yousaf_shah · November 8, 2012, 10:47pm

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well, kinzz its good effort,,,,but could b much much better.

like.........................................................................................

hum teree mahfil main ziker-klaam no hotey
gur churcehy hmaarey yun sir-e aam na hotey

any way good luck for feuture

SHAH G

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