My poem

[STA]

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ok fakhta bhai nay kafi acha point uthaya hai. queen nay bhi ussi baat ki nishan dahi ki hai, jo main apni pehli post main ki thi.

[jiia]

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acha to chalo phir daily post kia karen:lifey:

[STA]

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wow! kia inkishaafaat ho raha haiN yahaN...ab aap bhii apnaa koii kalaam sunaayeN aur apnaa bhii koii majmoo'a shaayt'a karvaayeN :) maiN to muntazir e deed huN :)

unhon nay pely hi app par nazam likhi thi. ager app ko yaad ho.

[KKF]

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unhon nay pely hi app par nazam likhi thi. ager app ko yaad ho.

mujh par nahiiN...mujhe dedicate kiyaa thaa :) haN han saHeeH, ab yaad aayaa...plz Queen_24 share some more! :)

[queen_24]

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@Khalil KhaaN FaaKhta

wow! kia inkishaafaat ho raha haiN yahaN…ab aap bhii apnaa koii kalaam sunaayeN aur apnaa bhii koii majmoo’a shaayt’a karvaayeN maiN to muntazir e deed huN

@STA

unhon nay pely hi app par nazam likhi thi. ager app ko yaad ho.

@Khalil KhaaN FaaKhta

mujh par nahiiN…mujhe dedicate kiyaa thaa haN han saHeeH, ab yaad aayaa…plz Queen_24 share some more!

KKF wo nazam aapko dedicate ki thi aaur aap p likhi bhi gayee theee…kese bhooool gaye

[STA]

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toota chishmi sekhni ho to kkf bhai say seekho

[jiia]

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toota chishmi sekhni ho to kkf bhai say seekho

lakin vo to FAKHTA hein toota nahi

[queen_24]

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@STA

toota chishmi sekhni ho to kkf bhai say seekho

[STA]

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@queen_24

ab kiya howa

[queen_24]

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ab unki bayrukhi p aik poem likhni paregi

[STA]

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@jiia

lakin vo to FAKHTA hein toota nahi

unhon nay bhees badla howa hai

[jiia]

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@STA

unhon nay bhees badla howa hai

unki av me toota chor den:fatee:

[muqawwee123]

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@Kinzz

I do write sometimes,and I know that I’m not a good poet lol

Here is one of my collection.

Hum mehfil e ghuftaghu na hotay
Agar tum kabhi hamari arzoo na hotay
Socha kabhi tu ne,humne Kia manga Dua Mai
Tum agar her khuwaisho se pehley na hotay
Zabat ka alam yeh ke lab pe la na sakay kuch
Yehi soch kar ke tum ankho Ki zuban perh kyu na sakay.

beautiful thoughts. keep it up. :k:

techniques aa hi jati hain.. Insan ke paas ideas hone chahiye

[STA]

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@muqawwee123

beautiful thoughts. keep it up. :k:

techniques aa hi jati hain.. Insan ke paas ideas hone chahiye

unkay shairi main aik jiddat hai. aslob-e-nazam main jo tameez woh rakhti hain, uska koi sani nahi.

zi nazar zi hosh gar dana tujhy
har baray shair nay mana tujhy

[muqawwee123]

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@STA

unkay shairi main aik jiddat hai. aslob-e-nazam main jo tameez woh rakhti hain, uska koi sani nahi.

zi nazar zi hosh gar dana tujhy
har baray shair nay mana tujhy

STA apni awaleen takhleeqat yun sar e aam rakh dena badi bahadur ka kaam hai. We should appreciate her. Great job Kinzz.

Tundi e baad e mukhalif se na ghabra ae uqaab
ye to chalti hai tujhe ooncha uRane ka liye

[Kinzz]

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Hahahahahhahaha

STA abhi batati hoo

[Kinzz]

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@STA

unkay shairi main aik jiddat hai. aslob-e-nazam main jo tameez woh rakhti hain, uska koi sani nahi.

zi nazar zi hosh gar dana tujhy
har baray shair nay mana tujhy

Jealous log

[Kinzz]

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efforts ke marks hain magar kuch bay-rabt si hay..... continuity nahin hay!! ya ye kehlo, linked nahin hay!!

Thanks

Apki shikayat ko mind Mai rakh ke next time likha jaye ga :p

[queen_24]

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@Kinzz

Thanks

Apki shikayat ko mind Mai rakh ke next time likha jaye ga

[Kinzz]

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@jiia

very nice KINZZ keep it up:k:

Thank you

@jiia

usne konsa MAJMUAA chapvana hy

And I totally agree