My poem

[Kinzz]

Re: My poem

Yeh version app Apne naaam se Shaiya kar den,

@queen_24

Hum kbhi Mehfil-e-guftugu na hotay
tum jo gr arzu-e-dil na hotay

socha kabhi kiya mangte dua main hum
tum jo gr dil me basay na hotay

aalam-e-zabat ke zuban p quful!!
kash ishara-e-nzr tum parh chuky hotay!!

now thats the version I corrected for you!! dono main difference dekh lo I could make it more clear but i wanted to keep your matter there!!

good luck for your future, You have skills though :k: