My Poem

Muslim_Queen · December 27, 2003, 10:00pm

My mind is a dark storm,
The thoughts crash like the sea,
No time to think or feel,
It is not I that stands before you,
It is a phantom with no face,
It is rage.

This is just something I wrote over the summer.I know it’s rather silly, but I scribbled it down in a moment of extreme anger.

Azad · December 27, 2003, 10:14pm

hummm

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · December 28, 2003, 2:55pm

hummmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Capricorn · December 28, 2003, 5:55pm

Wow…excellent…:k:

DiYa · December 28, 2003, 9:42pm

Re: My Poem

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *
My mind is a dark storm,
The thoughts crash like the sea,
No time to think or feel,
It is not I that stands before you,
It is a phantom with no face,
It is rage.

This is just something I wrote over the summer.I know it's rather silly, but I scribbled it down in a moment of extreme anger.
[/QUOTE]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Crescent · December 29, 2003, 7:35am

Re: My Poem

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *
My mind is a dark storm,
The thoughts crash like the sea,
No time to think or feel,
It is not I that stands before you,
It is a phantom with no face,
It is rage.

This is just something I wrote over the summer.I know it's rather silly, but I scribbled it down in a moment of extreme anger.
[/QUOTE]

I THINK THATS BRILLIANT! good work queen :D! wow

Golden_Scorpion · December 29, 2003, 9:29am

My Dear Queey...

Majority is the Authority... HALE DEMOCRACY....

HUmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ;)

Muslim_Queen · December 29, 2003, 1:41pm

capri and Crescent thank you.

Scorpion mai kehne wali thi -ke next person to say humm will get hit on his/her head.Which would be you.

Im never posting my poems again.I don’t like humms as comments.

Dilsay · December 29, 2003, 3:10pm

Wonderful

Muslim_Queen · December 30, 2003, 8:50pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Wonderful
[/QUOTE]

ty jee.

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 31, 2003, 4:16am

pretty janu:hug: :k:

i love these lines…

My mind is a dark storm,
The thoughts crash like the sea,
No time to think or feel

beautiful:hug:

Muslim_Queen · December 31, 2003, 5:27pm

ty jaanu and congrats on your 11k.

Sehar · December 31, 2003, 5:50pm

Nice…I like it. :k:

Muslim_Queen · December 31, 2003, 11:19pm

thank you jee.

MANAN · January 1, 2004, 4:26am

Nice 1

Aabi · January 1, 2004, 6:14am

Re: My Poem

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *
My mind is a dark storm,
The thoughts crash like the sea,
No time to think or feel,
It is not I that stands before you,
It is a phantom with no face,
It is rage.

This is just something I wrote over the summer.I know it's rather silly, but I scribbled it down in a moment of extreme anger.
[/QUOTE]

wow ghusse mein kitna accha likhti hein;)

she · January 1, 2004, 7:45am

:biggthumb

Muslim_Queen · January 1, 2004, 5:40pm

ty all.

Aabi yes I guess I should get angry more often haina?

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 2, 2004, 3:04am

awww thanko:kiss:

AQ · January 2, 2004, 4:20am

It is a phantom with no face,
It is rage.

^^
Exactly my thoughts:k: