My Poem

[Muslim_Queen]

*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *
It is a phantom with no face,
It is rage.

^^
Exactly my thoughts:k:

ty.

[system]

Good poem...

[rabika]

bohat achey:-)

[AmericanDeSi]

Re: My Poem

*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *
My mind is a dark storm,
The thoughts crash like the sea,
No time to think or feel,
It is not I that stands before you,
It is a phantom with no face,
It is rage.

This is just something I wrote over the summer.I know it’s rather silly, but I scribbled it down in a moment of extreme anger.

let me help u completing it…

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It is a promise of lies
It is pain
It is pleasure
It is a formless phantom
i finally figured it out
it is love in my mind
you were the love of my life,
now my love is dead. ***

u liked it, didn’t u it is my moment of anger…

[SuraJ]

Good effort and well thinking thx 4 sharing :K:

[Muslim_Queen]

salman, suraj and rabika thanks.

AD aww yes I love it.Thanks. You sent it to me on msn ,sorry forgot to check the thread.