wow... chanduu dawg... ur very talented... i like the black and white contrasts... but i think u can add a lil more compostion... maybe something in the background!
good work :-) keep it up :)
damn!
u one good artist! MASHALLAH
u got any more work of urs to show?![]()
reallie nice :k:
wow nice work:k:
keep it up:k:
here is my stake on this....you didnt do much good with light and shades, although the figures themselves arent that bad. You have projected the light source at the top left of the composition, yet you failed to provide any shades thereof for the items. and also there is no breathing room to the bottom and to the right. To me, in short, it is not a worthy at all.
(dont get disappointed, you asked for a fair analysis...didnt you! )
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you didnt do much good with light and shades, although the figures themselves arent that bad. You have projected the light source at the top left of the composition, yet **you failed to provide any shades thereof for the items*.
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You mean to say, I have given a single tone to the whole drawing? There is no sense of light and dark areas? There is a light source on the top left and you say the items have no lighter left sides and no darker right ones? I mean, I really don't understand where I have failed in showing that? I guess I should have enhanced the contrast a bit more( in terms of shading it is a rule to enhance contrast a bit more in the drawing from what u see in the reality), but I havn't failed totally for sure.
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and also there is no breathing room to the bottom and to the right. To me, in short, it is not a worthy at all.
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Yeah, that I agree. The bottom right looks too crowded as compared to the other parts.
Worthy of? I am not putting this damn thing on a sale.
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(dont get disappointed, you asked for a fair analysis...didnt you! )
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I am thoroughly disappointed, I cannot lie. I mean, no one has judged any of my drawings so harshly. I am attending an art school, and havn't faced even half the critisism in my whole term of what u have dished out here. But thanks anyways. I have to learn to take critisism aswell. Henceforth I won't forget the enhanced contrast rule.. thanks to you.
:)
P.S: Are you an instructor in some art-school? Or you are an artist of some kind? Or an art critic?
Bored in Brisbane , Nescio, Kanwal and T2 .. thanks for the kind words( :-p ) ![]()
hey well the picture is obv very nice as someone else pointed out too the figures are prefect .. but i think the area above the lying lipstick is a bit dark.. or may be something else had its shadow there when you were sketching it .. but its visible .. the objects not there but the shadow is.. so may be thats the only problem with the composition.. abt the rest the shading on the objects is great :) the bright parts seem real.
niceeeeeeeeeee
T2, Punjabi_Kuri, Wake-up_dead and Amirbilal .. Thanks you all! ![]()
Baba G: Thanks for the suggestions. The keeping one of the lipstick open idea is sure a good one. I’ll try that when in my next version.
Thanks for the appreciation too.
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blush Always happy to be your biatch. And you are my Biatch too .. don’t forget. Love ya! :-p And yeah, Thanks a lot! ![]()
Vivacious and Sherni .. Thank you. ![]()
Phoenix: Thanks darling. I’ll get working on those pics soon. ![]()
Now Give me my candy…
Ps:Amazing drawings.:k:
you're very talented.
DOKHAAA!!!
humm
nice work ;)
Atleast you could have said what you felt.. as in .. “cb, your drawing is excellent” ![]()
Sky, lussi and Nykhansahib .. thanks. ![]()
Sadi Sobi: Mui Bien, I tried searching the meaning in spanish and french dictionaries… but nothing like mui exists in either of em. Bien means well .. or okay or alright. So, I’ll just assume u loved my work and thus I wanna thank ya.. Thanks
Wonderful precision in the lines. Especially the one with folds/ripples. I like the black and white effect best. Great attention to detail. You are really talented Chandiiiii. Mash'Allah.
I draw worse than an elephant painting with his trunk. grin
It took you 6 days to come up with that ??? ![]()
Daaaaaaaaang
but you are slow, girl!
Read what I wrote to hiccup. I don’t have the energy to say it again.
P.S: I made an exception for this reply of urs. I was really mad to see what u wrote. :-p