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This is my latest work. It is a 18" * 24", pencil sketch(HB, 2B, 4B, 6B and 8B). People.. I need your opinion on the composition. Does this arrangement make up a good composition?
p.s: Pic isn’t clear enuff. Sorry! I have been working on it for past 12 hours I guess(including a few breaks), didn’t have the energy to take a better pic…
MashaAllah...very creative
Chandu babe...you amaze me everyday
cb, did u use crayons? :)
very nice 
wow, is that a mac lipstick btw?
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Yep it is. Love it! Spanish fly ( A89 )
achaaa :-) good taste. in my purse i have the film noir hayaa gave me and viva glam.
lovely drawing by the way :-)
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Yep it is. Love it! Spanish fly ( A89 )
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what color is it?
Good Work
Re: My Pic...
good work .....the tint n shade could be enhanced a little more...... :D
wow really nice…thx for sharing
keep it up :k: :k:
Re: My Pic…
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This one looks pretty nice :love:
thanx for sharing putter :k:
damn wheres ur pic 
zabardast sketchin!
amazing! thats really really nice work....
one suggestion.....the two nail polish bottles maybe moved more into the foreground...but thats is up to it would just break the line...
have you posted work her before? as u can see im a newie..but i would really like to see more of your work...x
nice and neat work !
as far as composition is concerned, i think they are fine, the reflection in left lip stick looks good but the one in horizontal position may be shifted.(just my opinion) :)
beautiful :love::k:
keep it up 
I thought the same thing!
Those are really good drawings CB. I am going to send you my pic cause I want you to draw me.
I think Mixed Pickle’s suggestion is good. Rather than having the objects all next to each other, move some forward and move some back rather than keeping them in the same line. That will show your ability to show objects at a distance…kinda in 3-D dimension.
CB 
lovely work 
Mixed Pickle and Mehnaz .. First of all thanks for the appreciation.
Well, I don't have all of them in the same line. The Cd lipstick(one on the left hand side and the shorter nail polish are in the same line.. The Mac lipstick and the taller nail polish are in a line.. which is further(not much) from the first one. The horizontal one lies between the lines. I guess I have failed in conveying the sense of space.
M_p and Mehnaz, yeah I think I should increase the distance a lil more. Would look more striking. Thanks for the suggestion.
Mehnaz: Any time sweety. Just pm me your pic whenever u want to.
Mixed_Pickle: Yes I have posted some more of my work b4. :-)
good work :k: