my new ghazal....................

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Rab say feryad kio nahi kertay ??
zeest abad kio nahi kertay??

ajkal pursakon hain ratain
tum mujhay yad kio nahi kertay??

mujh ko baychainian jo day jaye
wo gham eejad kio nahi kertay??

zindagi bay sir o saman hay bahut
meri imdaad kio nahi kertay??
by RABIA RANA(HAYA SHAH)

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Re: my new ghazal…

**Kya kahun, lajawaab hai, ant hai, akheer hai, zabardast hai, kamaal hai, be-misaal hai, waise aapka kya haal hai…:clown: ? **

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beautiful really,,

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awesome:k:

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Very nice :k:

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thanx a lot frnds....
khush rahain app sab

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***jo kahain lajawab ho,akheer ho,ant ho,zabar10t ho,kamal ho.be misal ho,ALHAM DU LLILLAH hum khushal hain…:smiley: ***

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nice one :)

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*Main nay kafi din baad yahan chakar laga ya hay ... MashaAllah Rabia J aap to chupi rustam nikli ... anyway nice ghazal ... *

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[quote=“rabia rana
ajkal pursakon hain ratain
tum mujhay yad kio nahi kertay??
by RABIA RANA(HAYA SHAH)[/QUOTE”]

Nice one,

Yet more inconsistencies in PA
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**thnx Saqi hte angel...............
or Sannan chuuppi rustam mai kaisay hui??

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Aap Shae’ra Nikli jo Iss Liay … by the way aap kuch aur to naheen samjh baithi theen :hmmm:

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nice

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***kuch or nahi samjhi thi bal k hairan hui thi bcoz app say pehlay tu sab khuli kitab hi kehtay thay:confused: ***

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**thanx Rani dear:) **

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NICE AND COOL P0EM

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Really who said you ??? Acha chalain aap key shae’ri parh kar daikhta houn …

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ji han ..really.meriay sabs dost.....family.....relatives...yehi kehtay hain

_________ ASaaSA ________
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very very nice Rabia g…:k:

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Rabia G Kia Kahnay aap kay ...araz karta houn

Yun hee bay sabab na phira karo,koi sham ghar pe raha karo
woh ghazal ki suchi **kitaab **hai ussay chupkay chupkay parha karo
koi haath bhi naa milaye ga jo galey milo gey tapak sey
yeh naye mizaaj ka shahar hai zara faaslay say milaa karo