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Yun hee bay sabab na phira karo,koi sham ghar pe raha karo
woh ghazal ki suchi kitaab *hai ussay chupkay chupkay parha karo
koi haath bhi naa milaye ga jo galey milo gey tapak sey
yeh naye mizaaj ka shahar hai zara faaslay say milaa karo
:) **hmmm...xcellent*
arz kia hay,
TUMHARAY SHAHER K LOGON MAI BURI BAT HAY YE
MILA LAIN HATH TU PHIR DIL JALA K RAHTAY HAIN
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Oh My God.......Mashallah...sannan bhai aur rabia g aap donon mein bohat talent hai.....aap donon aik aik kitab kyun nahi likhtay..jab aap donon ki book publish ho ge toh sab se pehlay mein hareedoon ge........both of u r excellent......
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very nice work!
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MG Khuda Ka Khouf Karo … Main Aur Kitaab 
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soooopppeeerrrrrrrrrr ..... Par
Shahar Kay Loog Achay Hain, Hamdard Hain, Par Hamari Suno Hum Jahan Garad Hain
Dagh-e-Dil Nah Kissi Ko Dikhana Sajan, Yah Zamana Naheen Woh Zamana Sajan
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Very nice Rabia, aap kab sey likhti aa rahi haiN, i mean when u wrote ur first Nazm or Ghazal? :)
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APp ki dua rahi tu zaror kitab bhi ajaye gi but us k liye itna talent nakafi hai ...i think so............means.......mera kam itna acha nahi hai k book asakay .....baqi app dua karain......zindagi bakhair ager ALLAA nay is taraf say izzat naseeb mai likhi hai tu zaror millay gi.....................or thanx 4 ur appriciation..khush rahao...FE AMAN ALLAH
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shukria GUL ........jahan tak mujhay yaad hai meri first ghazal intahaye bay tuki thi or wo tab likhi thi jab mai 8 class ki student thi taqreban 6 years pehlay us zamanay ka stuff bhi thora bahut hai kuch dinon mai wo bhi aiik new thred mai submit krwaongi INSHAALLAh
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Nice one.
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thanx H.H