Mushaira on Chat..

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I propose we keep a mushaira.. just casual laid back stuff innit?!

whose in to poetry and love shove? :hmmm:

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:blush:

do i need to mention my name..

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No u don't lol.. i think ur too much in to poetry :p

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:wub:

can i share few kamalaat of poetry here :@:

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If they will be said out loud on chat then why not! share ur kalamat :@:

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sure..

aik poet ko kia chaheay..

muft ka rash jo chup ker k bethay aur kalaam sunay :@:

Urdu as our national langauge
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Re: Mushaira on Chat..

to arz kia hai..

tere ghar ke saamnay seeti bajana yaad hai
phir tere abba se wo pitna pitana yaad hai

maar dena wo tere abba ka danda daf’attan
aur mera phir wahan se bhag jana yaad hai

:bobo:

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dewaron pe choon choon karta acha lagta hai
mujh ko to wo murghi ka bacha lagta hai

:@:

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koi wah wah he kar day akay :ASA:

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okay yahan nahi karni na karo.. magar jab main chat main parhoonga to wahan to akay wah wah kar do ge na ..

:halo:

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acha pehle hum mizaah ka session rakhtay hain then ghazal n then nazm..

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nahi nahi.. i have changed ma mind as i want to post ghazal pehle.. followed with funny poetry so that boriat main koi hans bhi sakay..

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so here comes first..

saza pe choR dee'ya jazaa pe choR dee'ya
haR ek kaam hum ne khuda pe choR dee'ya

wo hum ko yaad rakhta ya bhula daita
usi ka kama tha us ki raza pe choR dee;ya

us se baat bhi kaRte tu kis tar'haN kaRte
ye masla dua ka tha dua pe choR dee'ya

Iss lee'ey tu wo kehte haiN bewafa hum ko
k hum ne saRa zamaNa wafa pe choR dee'ya

us ki maRzi bujha de ya phiR jala rakhe
chiRag hum ne jala KaR hawa pe choR dee'ya

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Re: Mushaira on Chat..

thank you thank you..

here comes # 2

Dosti jab kisi se ki jaye
Dushmanon ki bhi rae li jaye

Maut ka zahr hai fizaon mein
Ab kahan ja k sans li jaye

Bas isi soch mein hun duba hua
Ye nadi kaise par ki jaye

Mere mazi k zakham bharne lage
Aj phir koi bhuul ki jaye

Botalien khol k to pi barson
Aaj dil khol k bhi pi jaye

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Redi talking to yourself man :hmmm:

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lolx Nami.. :@:

em pretending that ppl on chat are appreciating.. :@:

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thank you friends keeep the appreciations coming..

YaadoN kaY diye hum naY jalaaye thaY raat bhar
Da'm-e-Subah yooN lagaa bujhaaye thaY raat bhar

DekhtaY rahai chaaNd saY baadal kee AThkheliyaaN
Waqt-e-Firaaq bhee taaraY jagmagaye thaY raat bhar

Pheli huee, falak par unn zulmatoN kaY paar
kokab-e-Seh'r kee aah aur naalaY thaY raat bhar

Jungle maiN ajab ehsaas-e-wehshat kaY darmiyaaN
baRhtaY rahai ashjaar kaY saaye thaY raat bhar

Pau phaTTi tau falakbos pahaaRoN kee auTT saY
Taa'ir jamaa huaY, jo ghabraaYe thaY raat bhar

BhoolaY Khushtagaan-e-Shab, manzil-e-maqsood kaa suraagh
nishaaN-e-rah-guzar Anwaar naY samjhaaYe thaY raat bhar

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thaliyaaaan

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thank you thank you.. collecting thaliaan n placing in kitchen

Urdu as our national langauge
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abb aik aur

Bila jawaz rakhen khud ko beqaraar bhi kiun
Jo tu nahee hai to phir tera intezaar bhi kiun

Akelepan ka safar jab mera muqaddar hai
To phir ai waada shikan teri rehguzaar bhi kiun

Usey ganwa ke raho ab khizaon ki zad mai
Jo wo nahee hai to phir mausam-e-bahar bhi kiun

Agar bhulaye huye usko aik umr hui
To phir yeh aaj tabiyet hai sogwaar bhi kiun

Wo jin labon pe yaqeene wafa mehek na sakey
Phir unke lams ki khahish ho aik baar bhi kiun

Jab usko shauq tha raston ki dhool honey ka
Palat ke dekhta jaata tha baar baar bhi kiun