Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

TLK June 4, 2012, 4:34pm 1

Lets have a mushaira. All the Shora-e-GS are invited. Rules are simple. Every month we will come up with a misra -e- Tarah and you have to put TWO verses using that zameen.

(I am sorry if we have a similar thread going on. If we do then mods can delete this thread).

I give you one with pretty simple Radeef / Qafiya

ab ke hum bichRe to shaayad kabhee khwabon mein milainn
jis tarah sookhe hu’e phool kitaabon mein milain

LP June 4, 2012, 4:37pm 2

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

This is interesting
Cant wait to see the sho’ara start

KKF June 4, 2012, 4:39pm 3

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

good idea...but aapne to she'r likh diyaa...pick ONE misr'a. :)

TLK June 4, 2012, 4:42pm 4

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

That is why I put the opening shair of the ghazal (so both misray have same Wazan/ radeef / Qaifiya)

Ok lets pick the second Misra

jis tarah sookhe hu'e phool kitaabon mein milain

muqawwee123 June 4, 2012, 4:46pm 5

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

Means hum ne Faraz ki zameen per qabza karna hai

TLK June 4, 2012, 4:50pm 6

Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

Jee jee, we will be land mafia

Naabigh June 4, 2012, 4:51pm 7

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

Shair hoTa hai ab maheeNoo mein
Zindagii dhaal gaee Machinoo mein

Last date of submission kia hai - wo kia hai k - aj kaal amaad khaal khaal hai :)

devilish_angel June 4, 2012, 4:51pm 8

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

can i do some copy paste :@:

Naabigh June 4, 2012, 4:52pm 9

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

serif qabza nai karna hai - shairooN ki paneere lagga kar - ek ghazal ka guldasta banaa hai :hinna:

Goyam mushkil wa Gar …

LP June 4, 2012, 4:53pm 10

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

Mai thori sher shayri ki classes ley ke aati hoon

Naabigh June 4, 2012, 4:54pm 11

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wo jo Batien hum un se nahi kah paTay thay
wohi baatiien humay ab unkaY isharooN mein milaiN

:hinna:

devilish_angel June 4, 2012, 4:57pm 12

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

mujhe bhi chahye

KKF June 4, 2012, 5:03pm 13

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

shukria, navaazish, karam…vaise, agar chatroom men yeh mushaa’iura ho to bahtar hogaa…entry by password!

zameen par hii nahiiN unke sheroN aur sherniyoN par bhii!

soch leN…is meN Khatra ziyaada aur aamadnmii kam hai!

TLK June 4, 2012, 5:07pm 14

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I dont know yaar. I started the thread without thinking much. But I guess that its June Mushaira so JUne 30th should be last date.

Shair tou achcha hai lekin Ishaaron or Kitaabon main bohut farq hai. Hum radeef word le ke aa’ain janaab

TLK June 4, 2012, 5:07pm 15

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

But Misra pehlay se dena paray gaa.

KKF June 4, 2012, 5:10pm 16

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jii...ek taareeKh/time tai kar leN...jaise 15 June, 1 pm EST...is beech meN aHbaab she'r kah leN aur us din chatroom meN aa kar ham sab ko sunaa deN...

kia Khayaal hai?

TLK June 4, 2012, 5:11pm 17

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Ok its a tall order for me KKF. I am going to let Poetry and Chat mod make a decision :D

muqawwee123 June 4, 2012, 5:14pm 18

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

Nabigh Bhai aap Moin Akhtar ka Half Plate dekh len.. aap ko iss misre ke radeef mil jaen ge

Naabigh June 4, 2012, 5:21pm 19

Re: Mushaira - e - Gupshup, June 2012

Radif tu mil jata hai - lakin Misra Utha nahii hai phir

Jin ki shubat ki choRa thay Ulma ko
aj wohi hum ko qasabooN mein milaiN

:hinna:

KKF June 4, 2012, 5:24pm 20

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fair enuf...Muqawwee Bhai baag Dor aapke haath! chaabuk bhii aapke paas hai...ab kuchh chaabukdastii se kareN :) thankoo