mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui

NikamiJano · August 29, 2003, 11:39am

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meiN kae rutoN se hooN dekhta ke tamam rang heiN bujhe huwy
ye ab k khizaN ko kya huwa keo meRi nighah meiN thehaR ga’ee

meiN kya bataaoN k ab ki baaR chamaN ki haalat ajeeb thi
haR phool maatam-sara mila meRi jahaN jahaN bhi nazaR ga’ee

ye kon jaaney k kya huwa meiN dhoond dhoond ke thak gaya
ke wo jo aek titli thi baagh meiN wo bhi naajaaey kidhaR ga’ee

abhi hey zara wo asaR jisey meRi zaat ney pooja kabhi magar
wo januN to kab ka khatam huwa wo soorat to dil se utaR ga’ee

mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui
meiN apni jaga se hilaa nahi meri saaNs phir bhi ukharr ga’ee

ye chiraagh-e-jaaN bhi ajeeb hey ke jala huwa hey abhi talak
teri bewafaai ki aaNdhiyaaN to kabhi ki aa ke guzaR ga’eeN

merey aasmaaN ke haath meiN bas aek chaand tha aas ka
usey baadloN ney nigal liya to meri kaaeynaat hi ujarr ga’ee***

amirbilal · August 29, 2003, 11:44am

very nice

Daagh · August 29, 2003, 12:30pm

wah wah bahot khoob…
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mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui
meiN apni jaga se hilaa nahi meri saaNs phir bhi ukharr ga’ee
**
kya kehne

Amal · August 29, 2003, 12:40pm

Re: mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

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abhi hey zara wo asaR jisey meRi zaat ney pooja kabhi magar
wo januN to kab ka khatam huwa wo soorat to dil se utaR ga'ee

mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui
meiN apni jaga se hilaa nahi meri saaNs phir bhi ukharr ga'ee

ye chiraagh-e-jaaN bhi ajeeb hey ke jala huwa hey abhi talak
teri bewafaai ki aaNdhiyaaN to kabhi ki aa ke guzaR ga'eeN

merey aasmaaN ke haath meiN bas aek chaand tha aas ka
usey baadloN ney nigal liya to meri kaaeynaat hi ujarr ga'ee***
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NikamiJi ghazal to bas theek hi hey lekin aap ke husn-e-intikhaab ke baarey meiN hameiN koi shubha nahi:)... ye ghazal hamaarey saath share karney ke leeye aap ka shukriya ada karooN ya aap ki tashreef-aawari ke leeye?:)

system · August 29, 2003, 1:15pm

bohat khoob :)

WiseGuy · August 29, 2003, 2:01pm

Re: mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

**

meiN kae rutoN se hooN dekhta ke tamam rang heiN bujhe huwy
ye ab k khizaN ko kya huwa keo meRi nighah meiN thehaR ga'ee

meiN kya bataaoN k ab ki baaR chamaN ki haalat ajeeb thi
haR phool maatam-sara mila meRi jahaN jahaN bhi nazaR ga'ee

ye kon jaaney k kya huwa meiN dhoond dhoond ke thak gaya
ke wo jo aek titli thi baagh meiN wo bhi naajaaey kidhaR ga'ee

abhi hey zara wo asaR jisey meRi zaat ney pooja kabhi magar
wo januN to kab ka khatam huwa wo soorat to dil se utaR ga'ee

mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui
meiN apni jaga se hilaa nahi meri saaNs phir bhi ukharr ga'ee

ye chiraagh-e-jaaN bhi ajeeb hey ke jala huwa hey abhi talak
teri bewafaai ki aaNdhiyaaN to kabhi ki aa ke guzaR ga'eeN

merey aasmaaN ke haath meiN bas aek chaand tha aas ka
usey baadloN ney nigal liya to meri kaaeynaat hi ujarr ga'ee***
[/QUOTE]

Bohat khoob Jano Ji :)
Poori ki poori ghazal hee bohat achi hai,
Thank you for sharing...
waisay hamain aisa kyu lagta keh
"mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui" yeh misra kaheen paRha hai pehlay...

ahmadarsalan · August 29, 2003, 2:05pm

V nice

i hate reading urdu in english :)

ASA · August 29, 2003, 2:29pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ahmadarsalan: *
V nice

i hate reading urdu in english :)
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Mujahy wo log bouhat buray lagtaiN haiN jo Urdu maiN english USE kartay haiN.. :)

ASA · August 29, 2003, 2:31pm

nice Jano… :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 29, 2003, 3:30pm

hey nikami

i remem ap ne ye shair apne signatures mein bhee rakha tha kissi zamany mein.. mujhe boht pasand aaya tha mae ne note ker liya.. aur ab ap ki hee waja se mujhe ye ghazal bhee mil gayee thanks alot for sharin it with us

Eastern_Thoughts · August 29, 2003, 4:35pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

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mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui
meiN apni jaga se hilaa nahi meri saaNs phir bhi ukharr ga'ee

[/QUOTE]

:( :( :( :(

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 29, 2003, 7:55pm

excellent:k::k:

jasmeen · August 29, 2003, 7:58pm

once again a super posting by u:flower2:
its wonderful especially the last shar:flower1:

Pramod · August 29, 2003, 9:04pm

Ye to apne ** Amal Sahab ** kii eik khubsusrat ghazal hai. I like it very much.
Thanks for sharing it here ** Nikami Bahna **.
waise aaj kal aap rahte khaaN ho ? sab khairyat to hai ?

chand_chehra · August 29, 2003, 10:14pm

beautiful :k:

chand_chehra · August 29, 2003, 10:15pm

Re: Re: mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Bohat khoob Jano Ji :)
Poori ki poori ghazal hee bohat achi hai,
Thank you for sharing...
waisay hamain aisa kyu lagta keh
"mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui" yeh misra kaheen paRha hai pehlay...
[/QUOTE]

kahi nahi yehi jano kay signature main parha hoga :p

_Passionate · August 29, 2003, 10:37pm

Re: mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui

bohattttt khooob :k:

ullujii · August 30, 2003, 12:21am

bohoot khoob :k:

cuteepie · August 30, 2003, 12:52am

:k: :k: :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 30, 2003, 4:13am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Pramod: *
Ye to apne * Amal Sahab ** kii eik khubsusrat ghazal hai.

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is it nikami jee and amal bahii:)