mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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yeh buhat dafa post hua hai magar it is excellent :k:

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Originally posted by Pramod: *
Ye to apne * Amal Sahab ** kii eik khubsusrat ghazal hai. I like it very much.
Thanks for sharing it here ** Nikami Bahna **.
waise aaj kal aap rahte khaaN ho ? sab khairyat to hai ?
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Yeh aaj kal khwabon mein rehtee hain din dihaare bhee :)

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Great one !

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Wah!

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boht khob nikami je :)

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thanks ** amir..P.thrope..suraj…gkk…CP…Passion..
yasmeen..AsweetA…A.arsalan…Viv…Hh…aur jo new hain un ko welcome **:flower1:

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ur welcome Hh aur ye sher abhi be hamra sig hia change nahi kia hum ne..:)..cuz me change kam kam karti

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:blush:

PS: chando g IN ko kisi ne ulu ka khitaab dya hia…:hehe: WG u know am jokiing ha na :wink:

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*Originally posted by Amal: *


NikamiJi ghazal to bas theek hi hey lekin aap ke husn-e-intikhaab ke baarey meiN hameiN koi shubha nahi:)... ye ghazal hamaarey saath share karney ke leeye aap ka shukriya ada karooN ya aap ki tashreef-aawari ke leeye?:)
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hmmmm *Aymal * dekhiaye ap aisay tareaf nahi kar saktey hamari post ki huwei gazal ki aisay tu na kahiey na bus theek he hia ...kisi sha'er k mu se asi tareaf sun k lagta hia k wo jis ki ye gazal likhi hai us se thora jelous ho k..;) g ap hamari post main 2 dafa aiey aik dafa shukria hamarey anay ka aur aik dafa post ka....

PS: thanks any way ap ki is kisam ki tareaf ka

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:slight_smile: thanks

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Re: Re: mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui

sahi capo achi chez ko 1000 tame be post kia jaiey tu wo wsi he rahti bal;k aur zaida nikharti hai na :slight_smile:

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:eek:

hey Nikammi ye kia Amal bhai ki ghazal hai?? :eek: :k::k:

vaisay sowwy mae ne dekha nahi k tumhara sign wohi hai :smack:

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jo hum ne daastaN apni sunaiey ap keon roo’eey..:teary1:

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Pramod: *
Ye to apne * Amal Sahab ** kii eik khubsusrat ghazal hai. I like it very much.
Thanks for sharing it here ** Nikami Bahna **.
waise aaj kal aap rahte khaaN ho ? sab khairyat to hai ?
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Pra g sahi kaha aur nikami k post ki huwie kafi gazlon main sheron main ** Amal Sahab ** he nazar atey i mean inhi ki hoti agar ap ghar kia karo tu....

PS: thanks and me tu yehi pe hoti ap khud us waqat niqal k atey jab zarorat hoti kisi ko reply karnay ki warna baqie becharey tu ap ki replies se mahroom he rah jatey :p naamwar nahi hotey na gumshuda hotey sha'ed isi leay

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Bohat khoob Jano Ji :)
Poori ki poori ghazal hee bohat achi hai,
Thank you for sharing...
waisay hamain aisa kyu lagta keh
"mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui" yeh misra kaheen paRha hai pehlay...
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agar ap ghor karen tu sher abhi be ap ko Nikami k sig main nazar aiey gha :p

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

sahi capo achi chez ko 1000 tame be post kia jaiey tu wo wsi he rahti bal;k aur zaida nikharti hai na :)
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Thats the information I needed, Thanks. :)

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:(

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G Hh ye Amal ki hia kafi dair pahlay ki socoha dobara likh and hamin bohat pasand hia ye …is leay dobara post ki agay be kae dafa ki hia post …:slight_smile:

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any thing else…

PS: jus wondring why u need all these info…:confused:

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:confused: :frowning: :nono1: :love: