system
February 19, 2007, 8:06am
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Tazaad-e-jazbaat meiN jo naazuk maqaam aaya to kya karo gey
MaiN ro raha hooN tum haNs rahey ho, maiN muskuraya to kya karo gey
**Kuch apney dil par bhi zakhm khao, mere lahoo ki bahaar kab tak **
Mujhey sahara banaaney waalo, maiN laRkhaRaaya to kya karo gey
Mujhey to is darja waqt-e-rukhsat sukooN ki talqeen kar rahey ho
Kabhi kuch apney liye bhi socha, maiN yaad aaya to kya karo gey
Abhi to taskeen ho rahi hai, mere mazaaq-e-junooN pey lekin
Tumhari zulfoN ki barhamii ka, sawaal aaya to kya karo gey
Abhi to daaman chuRaa rahey ho, bigaR key “Qabil” se ja rahey ho
Magar kabhi dil ki dhaRkanoN meiN, shareek paaya to kya karo gey
- Qabil Ajmeri
Aqls
February 19, 2007, 8:52am
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Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
bohat khoob
daad deni hogii aapke intikhaab ki
Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
Wow - great one...
system
February 19, 2007, 12:30pm
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Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
Shukriya Aqal-less and Mysterious Woman.. :-)
Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
one of my fav… thanks for sharing KN
Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
dil ki dharkano mai shareek paya to kaya karo gaye... wah
bohat khoob :K:
Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
v nice KN :)
Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
Nice :)
AQ
February 20, 2007, 7:05am
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Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
Thanks you KN :) beautiful :)
Pakeeza
February 20, 2007, 7:51am
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Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
Nice stuff thanku for sharing khamosh nigahon wali larki:~)
Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
very nice...
system
July 17, 2007, 8:21pm
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:-)
Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
wah after 5 months answer diya hey , kya baat hey:~)
system
July 17, 2007, 8:32pm
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Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
Answer nahiN diya... Bas abhi yeh ghazal sun rahi thi to I just felt like bringing it up again... :-)
Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
akeley akeley suna ja raha hey:~)
Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
kisi papeehay ne koi barkha ka geet gaaya to kya karo gay
abi to "phaagan" ka hai maheena, jo "saawan" aya to kya karo gay
hansein gi kaliyaan, khilein gay gunchay, sajay gi phoolon ki sej lekin
kia tha aanay ka jis ne waada, wohi na aaya to kya karo gay
abi to hai do-peher ka aalam, abi to chaaya nahi andhera
juda tumhaaray badan se hoga tumhaara saaya to kya karo gay
ufaq pe nazrein jama k tum ne kiya bharosa jin aahaton ka
un aahaton se b tum ne aakhir fareb khaaya to kya karo gay
ye mashwara apnay dil se kar lo shikast-e-jaam-o-subuu se pehlay
tumhaari toba ka baadlon ne mazaaq uraaya to kya karo gay
zameen se mayoos ho k tum chaand ki taraf ja rahay ho lekin
wahan b tum ne jo zindagi ka nishaan na paaya to kya karo gay
QATEEL tum jisko chaahtay ho, chupaao laakh uska naam piyaaray
tumhaari sanjeedgi ko mosam ne gud'gudaaya to kya karo gay
system
July 17, 2007, 8:46pm
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Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
GhazleiN akeley sun'ney meiN hi mazza aata hai :-)
system
July 17, 2007, 8:53pm
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Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
abi to hai do-peher ka aalam, abi to chaaya nahi andhera
juda tumhaaray badan se hoga tumhaara saaya to kya karo gay
ye mashwara apnay dil se kar lo shikast-e-jaam-o-subuu se pehlay
tumhaari toba ka baadlon ne mazaaq uraaya to kya karo gay
Bohat hi umda ghazal hai.. Is this a sequel to the previous one or a seperate ghazal in the same "zameen"? Thank you so much for posting it here.. Truly appreciated :-)
Amal
July 18, 2007, 1:31am
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Re: ~ Mujhe sahara bananey walo, maiN laRkhaRaya to kya karo gey
Tazaad-e-jazbaat meiN jo naazuk maqaam aaya to kya karo gey
MaiN ro raha hooN tum haNs rahey ho, maiN muskuraya to kya karo gey
**Kuch apney dil par bhi zakhm khao, mere lahoo ki bahaar kab tak **
Mujhey sahara banaaney waalo, maiN laRkhaRaaya to kya karo gey
Mujhey to is darja waqt-e-rukhsat sukooN ki talqeen kar rahey ho
Kabhi kuch apney liye bhi socha, maiN yaad aaya to kya karo gey
Abhi to taskeen ho rahi hai, mere mazaaq-e-junooN pey lekin
Tumhari zulfoN ki barhamii ka, sawaal aaya to kya karo gey
Abhi to daaman chuRaa rahey ho, bigaR key “Qabil” se ja rahey ho
Magar kabhi dil ki dhaRkanoN meiN, shareek paaya to kya karo gey
- Qabil Ajmeri
5 months puraani hey to kya huwa, ghazal to zabardast hey. I somehow missed it first time Very hi nice KhamoshNigahein :k: Thanx for sharing it with us
system
July 19, 2007, 7:07pm
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Thank you for liking Amal :-)