pighal pathar bhi saktay hein
ulat darya bhi sakta hai
koi aawara sa panchi
palat kar aa bhi sakta hai
k jo shab mujh pay hansti thi
wohi shab ro bhi ssakti hai
muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai …
pighal pathar bhi saktay hein
ulat darya bhi sakta hai
koi aawara sa panchi
palat kar aa bhi sakta hai
k jo shab mujh pay hansti thi
wohi shab ro bhi ssakti hai
muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai …
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
hmmm...........everything is possible in this world!
anyways...nice poem!
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
Very nice.......:)
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
hmmmmm very nice n touchy
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
v nice :)
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
very nice. thanks a lot.
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
very nice poem!
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
:) Nice it was
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
pighal pathar b skta hain agar
agar seena main lawa ho
ulat darya b skta hain
agar koi drawa ho
koi aawara sa panchi
palat kar aa bhi sakta hai
koi chahat ka rishta
bichar kar ja b skta ha
k jo shab mujh pay hansti thi
wohi shab ro bhi ssakti hai
k jo khushyoon ka mahwar the
wo rut kho b sakti ha
muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai .......
<!-- / message -->muhabat kho bhi skti hai
a tribute to ths poem
an appriciation with my style
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
urs was nice wt about ths
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
WelCome TakmeeL.
Good 2 c u again. But im not in a mood 2 become POET this time :)
The additions u made are not bad. U know what. U got some beautiful words. Really. Kahan se laati ho? And poetry is ofcourse all about words. U just need 2 put them right. Once u learn that art.Thats it :)
Re: Muhabbat ho bhi sakti hai
thanx