wah Amal bohut khoobsoorat likhe hai hamesa ke trha:k::k::k:
waise ap itne ache likh kis trha latay hain:bummer:
apke her ghazal aik se bahr ker aik hai:k:
keep it up and yes thanks for sharing:flower1:
Re: MohabbatoN sey raahateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
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*Originally posted by Amal: *
AasmaaN sey inaayaetiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
mohabbatoN sey raahateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
thi aarzu kabhi saahiloN pe terey saath saath hum chal sakeiN
par samandaroN sey ijazateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
jis zindagi ki khaahishoN meiN so rat'jagoN meiN sajood keeye
us zindagi ki bashaarateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
na to terey dard rukey kaheeN na merey zakhm bharey kabhi
sabar-o-shukar ki haalateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
teri manzileiN kahein aur theiN meri manzileiN kaheiN aur theiN
kisi aek simt ki musafateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
hamaari pur'khaloos neeyatoN sey manzileiN kiuN chin gaeiN! muqaddaroN sey wazahateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
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bohat khoobsurat gazal hia Amal..par k achi lagi bohat thanks 4 ur time k ap ne apnay keemti waqat se niqal kar ham logo k sath itni achai gazal share ki ....chalo aj koi aur dhondhna nahi parye ghi aprnay k leay hamara time save kar dya ap ne :)
PS: ap aik gazal kitnay din main likh laitey ho ..:)..just 4 information..:)
Re: MohabbatoN sey raahateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
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*Originally posted by Amal: *
AasmaaN sey inaayaetiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
mohabbatoN sey raahateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
hameiN aashiqi meiN sach mila hameiN zindagi meiN sab mila
magar be'wafaai ki aadateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
udhar tu duwa meiN laga raha idhar meiN duwa meiN laga raha
par mannatoN sey haajateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
thi aarzu kabhi saahiloN pe terey saath saath hum chal sakeiN
par samandaroN sey ijazateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
jis zindagi ki khaahishoN meiN so rat'jagoN meiN sajood keeye
us zindagi ki bashaarateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
hasratoN ke deeyoN ko aag kabhi tu ney di kabhi meiN ney di
magar roshni ki alaamateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
na to terey dard rukey kaheeN na merey zakhm bharey kabhi
sabar-o-shukar ki haalateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
teri manzileiN kahein aur theiN meri manzileiN kaheiN aur theiN
kisi aek simt ki musafateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
tu tthear gaya kisi aur ke ghar meiN ruk gaya kisi aur ke dar
man-pasand si chaahateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
hamaari pur'khaloos neeyatoN sey manzileiN kiuN chin gaeiN!
muqaddaroN sey wazahateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
By: Amal
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Beautiful as i started reading this it started going deep in heart each and every word of this has been well written and the softness of the words can make you feel soft at heart...
First shahair has a lot in it...
Second one is more thn the first one... we have got everything in love but not what you have mentoned magar phir asa kohoon hai...
Amal jee this is more thn i can read i can not read more thn third one this the best piece of all you have posted so far... i hope you wont mind me saying this all your poetry is great but this one is like something out of this world....
Loved it … its beautiful..esp da last couplet..
hamaari pur’khaloos neeyatoN sey manzileiN kiuN chin gaeiN!
muqaddaroN sey wazahateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN
[QUOTE] Originally posted by *Masoom Muskaan: *
amal bhaee pooree poem hie boht khobsurat likhe hei ap nei pehlei walie sei asan hei islie muge samegh a gei hei:)
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~Nazish~, &Passionate, Galaxy, XChorniX, X_Communist,
XkanwalX, Pramod, Munir, Ocean Of Love, juMurA and WiseGuy, aap sab dostoN ke be’had shukriya jo aap
ney is ghazal ki itni pazee’raai ki:flower1:
ghazal kisi ke: I really don’t know how do I write
what you call “itne ache.” I am extremely thankful.
Amarbail: I love it when someone quote one or two verses
from my writings. It helps me a lot when I gather all the feedback for a
technical analysis of my work and quotes always give me a good idea
about what I am doing. Anyhow, thanx a lot for your comments.
Paglee: Sometimes it takes just half-n-hour and sometimes it
takes one week. It depends how much time I could give to one ghazal
in one sitting. Thanx a lot:)
CC: “sachay dil” sey manaaga jaaey to bohat kuch mil jaata hey,
lekin sab kuch nahi. Kuch cheezeiN hum maang to letey heiN lekin
Khuda jaanta hey ke wo hamaarey leeye theek nahi heiN. Bas isi leeye
hameiN wo cheez nahi milti. Anyhow, thanx for liking the ghazal.
Masoom Muskaan: HameiN khushi hui ke hamaari chotti si
behna ko ye ghazal samajh bhi aai aur pasand bhi:)
Dilsay: Aap ke comments ke bohat bohat shukriya. Mujhey
khushi hey ke aap ko na sirf ye ghazal pasand aai, balke ab tak meri
postings meiN sey sab sey acchi lagi. Merey leeye ye aezaaz ki baat
hey:flower1:
