Mohabat ki Demaak...................

SJ · September 16, 2007, 8:39am

meray humdam meray doost

iss say pehlay k teray dil mein..

kaee khahishon ka baseera ho

jo haal mera hai wohee teraa ho

sun!!!

maree baat zara ghour say sun

Mohabat aik demaak hai…

jo rafta rafta…

dheray dheray

apna app dikha jatee hai

jis mein mohabat buss jatee hai

uss ko akhir kha jatee hai…

deep_ocean · September 16, 2007, 9:59am

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very nice Soniaa_jee :k:

Keep it up

Shab-e-Hijar · September 16, 2007, 12:41pm

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w.o.w

so true

good job :k:

Prince_Ali · September 16, 2007, 2:03pm

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wah sonia! yeh bhi lajawab hai :lajwab: nice

SJ · September 16, 2007, 2:44pm

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aww…
thank you Ali:)

SJ · September 16, 2007, 2:45pm

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thanks Shabbo:hugz:

mirage · September 16, 2007, 5:59pm

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beautiful thought. keep it up :)

SJ · September 16, 2007, 6:03pm

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thanks Mirage…
app nay kuch share nahin kiya ???

redidentity · September 17, 2007, 4:15am

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no word to say.. i have been a victim as well..

SJ · September 17, 2007, 8:35am

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Awww…
ab kya karain…koi Anti mohabat demaak spray bhi available nahin hai market mein:cb:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 17, 2007, 8:37am

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Idea tou buhat acha hey Sonia, buhat achey andaaz mein bayaaN kiya hey, aap Nazm ziyada khoobsurat likh leti heiN, thanks for sharing :-)

SJ · September 17, 2007, 8:42am

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thanks alot dear sis
han thats true…i m nt a good ghazal writer…nazam mein phir bhi tukka lag jataa hai:)

deadsoul · September 17, 2007, 12:00pm

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nice one sonia

Amal · September 17, 2007, 1:58pm

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Bohat umda nazm hey soniaa_jee k: You have put it beautifully. Lekin meiN soch raha tha ke kya “mohabbat ki demaak” ke bagheir zindagi ka tasavvur mukammal hota hey? Just a thought

SJ · September 17, 2007, 2:44pm

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wel janab…mohabaat karain magar ehtayaaat say…kahain wabal ban gayee tu mushkil ho ge:)

Amal · September 17, 2007, 3:25pm

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Hmmm...mohabbat na ho gai driving ho gai :~)

I guess soch samajh kar kaarobaar to ho sakta hey, mohabbat nahi. Planning has nothing to do with mohabbat. Just a thought :~)

SJ · September 17, 2007, 3:33pm

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wel planning kon kar raha hai................
buss aik baat he ki thee............k sooch samajh kar he aag mein kodain:)

tum_bin_1 · September 17, 2007, 5:03pm

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Bohat Khoob :k:

lovisimmortal · September 18, 2007, 11:00am

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wah sonia jee wah... bauhat khub... bauhat hi khuuub... aap ne to dimagh ke chhoolay hila diye... kuch yaadein yaad aagayein... ek chhota sa sher nazar kerdon... apne dosto ke liye ke...

silsilay khud toot jaate hain
silsilay torta nahi koi

Shumaisa · September 19, 2007, 12:36am

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hmm okay.. Sun b liya hai aur yaad b rakhon gi :rotato:
Very nice sharing Sonii..