meRi zaat ki udasi mujhaY aa'j lay na doobaY

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Shab-e-Hijar November 17, 2006, 11:20pm 1

meRay rastooN maiN tu hai meRi manziloN maiN tu hai maiN kisi bhe simat ja'ooN teRa akas chaaR soo hai
meRi zaat ki udasi mujhaY aa’j lay na doobaY
meRi subha be-nazaR hai meRi shaam be-sabo hai

jahaN phool khil rahaY theY meRay khawab k safaR maiN
khuli aa’nkh tu ye dekha k wo shaakh be-namoo hai

ye jahan-e-no ka naqsha jo nazaR maiN bus gaya hai
ye meRa faRaib-e-dil hai k talisam-e-aa’Rzoo hai

ye samaa’N be dekhna tha meRi be-basi ne shaa’ed
meRay luub silaY huwey haiN mujhaY azan-e-guftagoo hai

NikamiJano November 18, 2006, 2:29am 2

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Beautiful shab:blush:
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mahamkhan November 19, 2006, 11:07am 3

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very nice ghazal...thnx for sharing...!

Koyal November 23, 2006, 12:26pm 4

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v nice shabo..ap kahaN kho gaa'ee hain nazar he nahiati :(

EEMAAN November 23, 2006, 7:33pm 5

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Bohat khoob..

Jhuki_Nigahein November 24, 2006, 4:46pm 6

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V Nice :)

Decent_Munda November 24, 2006, 5:13pm 7

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Nice.

system November 27, 2006, 8:53am 8

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Lovely... Every sher is better than the previous one.. Thank you for sharing.. :-)
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Shab-e-Hijar December 23, 2006, 9:27am 9

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thanks guys

Aqls December 23, 2006, 1:31pm 10

Re: meRi zaat ki udasi mujhaY aa'j lay na doobaY

wonderful

shab ehijr thanks a ton for sharing this gem..

just great yaar !!

solomon December 23, 2006, 7:07pm 11

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wonderful,dil main utar janye walyi poetry

sad_affect December 24, 2006, 1:09pm 12

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ye samaa'N be dekhna tha meRi be-basi ne shaa'ed
meRay luub silaY huwey haiN mujhaY azan-e-guftagoo hai
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Its very nice shab

nakhan December 24, 2006, 2:16pm 13

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very good

Paglee December 27, 2006, 4:18am 14

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nice one shabnum :)

IS December 28, 2006, 4:21am 15

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*Nice Sharing :-) *

Shab-e-Hijar December 28, 2006, 7:53am 16

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thanks all

kaleemhk December 28, 2006, 2:23pm 17

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Very nice.......:)

Capricorn December 28, 2006, 5:20pm 18

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Is shaair kee dimaghee haalat theek naheen. Ya to woh apne un se maayoos hai kuch is tarah ke woh aas paas bhee hai phir bhee subhein be nazar aur shaamein be saboo hain ya phir doosra shair likhte waqt us ko bath room jana tha

EEMAAN December 28, 2006, 6:53pm 19

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Bohat khoob..