meri yaad k nagar maiN meray khawab k safar maiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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ye jo zeest ka safar hai
ye jo raasta hai mera
tum agar saath na doogay
kis tarha katey gha
ye gumaaN be kesya aa’ey?
***koi pal bina tumharay ***
bhala kesay beet jaa’ey
meray paas tum nahi ho
meray paas kab nahi ho
meri yaad k nagar maiN meray khawab k safar maiN
meri sooch ki tahoN maiN
meray aankhk bhawar maiN
meray dil maiN
jaan maiN taan maiN
meri hasratooN k bin maiN
meray din ki teer’ghi maiN
meray shab ki roshni maiN
haan tum he ho’haan tum he ho meray paas tum nahi ho
meray paas kab nahi ho?
meri her dua ka mehwar
bus ik aar’zoo tumhari
isi aa’rzoo k agay
koi raasta nahi hia
tumhiN kis qadar hai chaha
ye tumhiaN pata nahi hia
ye jo zeest ka safar hai
ye jo raasta hia mera
tum agar saath na doo gay
tu kis tarha katay gha?

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lovely..buhat khoob :flower2:

The Random Thread
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Re: meri yaad k nagar maiN meray khawab k safar maiN

Bohat khoob koyal :):k:…very nice indeed. Wesey aaj kal kin baadloN par basera hey aap ka? :wink:

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very nice

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Hmmm Beautiful

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hummm

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Re: meri yaad k nagar maiN meray khawab k safar maiN

very nice koyal ji

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nice choice Koyal :)

Guys Thread: Aren't pakistani girls little uptight.
Guys Thread: Aren't pakistani girls little uptight.
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Beautiful Poem Koyal:-)

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beautiful koyal :hug:

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beautyfull :)

abhee tek nahee ponhcha
abhee tek nahee ponhcha
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Nice thanx 4 shering

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nice 1

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very nice
thanx for sharing

Welcome my childhood buddy :D
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Koyal ji...mubarak...salamat,

Bari khoobsurat nazm aur bara maddhim suron wala andaaz hai aapka,
bari dheemi aanch par paki hai yeh nazm......I am impressed.....
Main abhi tifl e maktab hun, magar aapki ejazat hu, to pahle band ko iss tarha
parh kar dekhen. shaid apko achha lage, waise original main koi burayee bhi nahi.

" YEH JO ZEEST KA SAFAR HAI,
TUM HI HUM SAFAR HO MERE,
TUM AGAR NA SAATH DOGE,
TOU YEH KIS TARHA KATE GA "
All the best, and thanks for sharing.

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Bohat khoob

Jee humko bhi is sawal ka jawab chaheay, kin baadaloN, kin daraKHtoN, kin imaartoN per basera hai aaj kal?

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thanks PK :slight_smile: :flower2:

Is the tide about to turn against Zardari?
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thanks Amal..badera tu ap k aa’ss paas he hai koyal ka wo aleida baat hia k kali hai is leay ap ki ankhon ko dekhaiey nahi daiti :frowning:

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thanks gazal :slight_smile:

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hmmmmm :rolleyes: