meri yaad k nagar maiN meray khawab k safar maiN

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@Azad

hummm

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@ghazel rizvi

very nice koyal ji

thanks

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@Jhuki Nigahein

nice choice Koyal

thamks ankhin..aik tu kafi kisam ki ankhin hain yahan pata he nahi chalta

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@Pakeeza

Beautiful Poem Koyal:-)

thanks pak:)

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@Maheen2002

beautiful koyal

thanks maheeno me mish you

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@ullujii

beautyfull

thanks uluji also thanks rive and simply:)

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@darwesh

Koyal ji…mubarak…salamat,

Bari khoobsurat nazm aur bara maddhim suron wala andaaz hai aapka,
bari dheemi aanch par paki hai yeh nazm…I am impressed…
Main abhi tifl e maktab hun, magar aapki ejazat hu, to pahle band ko iss tarha
parh kar dekhen. shaid apko achha lage, waise original main koi burayee bhi nahi.

" YEH JO ZEEST KA SAFAR HAI,
TUM HI HUM SAFAR HO MERE,
TUM AGAR NA SAATH DOGE,
TOU YEH KIS TARHA KATE GA "
All the best, and thanks for sharing.

shurkia derwaish g…nazam madhim suron main he achi lagti na …

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@WiseGuy

Bohat khoob

Jee humko bhi is sawal ka jawab chaheay, kin baadaloN, kin daraKHtoN, kin imaartoN per basera hai aaj kal?

is ka jawab dainay main aik din chaiey ap k paas hia time jawab sunay ka ..wesay me HAJ pe ja rehi dua kijiay gha k khayriaat se wapi aiey aik do din main flight hia:) INshAllah

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Koyal Saheba,
darweshnawazi ka shukriya...
Bari acchi khabar sunayee aapne Haj wali...duago hun, khudawand
aapke safar aur arkaan Haj ko aasaan farmayee, aur Qubool kare, Ameen !
Yeh chand ashaar apke safar ke saath ke liye.... yaad aaye to Sarkar e madina
se itna kahiyega ek darwesh apko Yaad karta hai ! Wasalaam "Haj Mabroor ".

" Mere Monis Mere Ghamkhwaar Madeene Wale,
Aaraha hun main Tere Duar Madeene Wale !
Basti Basti Teri Yadon ko Liye Phirta Hai,
Tera Bismil Tera Beemar Madeene Wale !
Ishq Ka Dawa bhi Sharminda Pashemaani Bhi,
Hun Shafa'at Ka Talabgaar..... Madeene Wale !
Khaak e Pa ko Teri , Ankhon se Laga lon Aaqa,
Mere Mushfiq Mere Dildaar Madeene Wale !
Main Kahan Aur Kahan Gumbad e Khizra, Darwesh,
Iss Enayat pe Hun Sharshaar Madeene Wale !!!

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Niz sharing koyal lovely nazam it is

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@Noor_gr8

Niz sharing koyal lovely nazam it is

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bohat achee nazam hay ...

mere chara ger .mere chara ger
mere dard ki tujhay kia khabar

tere hath say mere hath tuk
jo hath bher ka tha fasla

ussay naptay usay kat-tay
mere sara waqt nikal gya

nahi jis pey koi nishan-e-paa
mere samnay hay woh rah guzar

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@* Hamna *

bohat achee nazam hay ...

mere chara ger .mere chara ger mere dard ki tujhay kia khabar

tere hath say mere hath tuk jo hath bher ka tha fasla

ussay naptay usay kat-tay mere sara waqt nikal gya

nahi jis pey koi nishan-e-paa mere samnay hay woh rah guzar

nice one hamna :)

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Wow Yaar

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@Koyal

thanks uluji also thanks rive and simply:)

uhh aj kis kushi main hum co thank you keh rahi hain

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@ullujii

uhh aj kis kushi main hum co thank you keh rahi hain