Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

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Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

@Amal

Friends, I tried to write a Punjabi ghazal very first time in my life. I had never done so ever. So just let me know how successful I was in my try

Aey safar hayaati da weykho hun kitthey jaa kar mukda ey
meiN jinna khich kar saaN leyNwa mera onna-e-dam hun kutthda ey

har raat to pehley haoli jai meri neendar mey’toN puchdi ey
akkhaN di wanjar tharti wich haorey khoaab kehrra huN ugda ey

hun ban, banaa kar ki khatna hun saj, saNwar kar ki karna
o’weiN rooh di galyaN koochaN wich dardaaN da kattha urrda ey

haorey kehrri apni kit’ti aey jerri murr murr aggoN aaondi ey
aey khorr naseebaN da loko aeweiN naal kad’di nai turda ey

aey dukh hi paveiN sangi ho meiN pul pullah kar beittha waaN
koi yaari aey’toN hey apni koi rishta aey’toN jurrda ey

aey aas nemaani nai murrdi so waar meiN aennoN dasya ey
jo dil wich merey rehnda si kisey hor shehar hun wasda ey!

By: Amal

ae te baun changi haigi hai
aes noon hun chadna nain saanon haur vi punjabi ghazlan parhn da mauqa dayo.

ik Mian Muhammad Bakhsh da shair suno

neechan di ashnai koloon faiz kisay na paaya
keekar te angoor charhaya har guchha zakhmaya