Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal
Friends, I tried to write a Punjabi ghazal very first time in my life. I had never done so ever. So just let me know how successful I was in my try :)
Aey safar hayaati da weykho hun kitthey jaa kar mukda ey meiN jinna khich kar saaN leyNwa mera onna-e-dam hun kutthda ey
har raat to pehley haoli jai meri neendar mey'toN puchdi ey akkhaN di wanjar tharti wich haorey khoaab kehrra huN ugda ey
hun ban, banaa kar ki khatna hun saj, saNwar kar ki karna o'weiN rooh di galyaN koochaN wich dardaaN da kattha urrda ey
haorey kehrri apni kit'ti aey jerri murr murr aggoN aaondi ey aey khorr naseebaN da loko aeweiN naal kad'di nai turda ey
aey dukh hi paveiN sangi ho meiN pul pullah kar beittha waaN koi yaari aey'toN hey apni koi rishta aey'toN jurrda ey
aey aas nemaani nai murrdi so waar meiN aennoN dasya ey jo dil wich merey rehnda si kisey hor shehar hun wasda ey!
By: Amal
badi sohni ghazl hai...amal, tuhanu wadhaaean howan tussin punjabi wich kavita vi kar sakday ho...tay baray gifted ho......hor vi kadhi likhna....