Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (ehsan uncle)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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uncle ki choice ki to dunia mo’atraf hai… ab dekhte hain unki top 10 favorite poems.

aa jaiye uncle.. aap ka hi intezar hai :cheer:

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Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (ehsan uncle)

yesss.....

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I will post them tomorrow.

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Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (ehsan uncle)

sure take your time. Public is waiting

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Thanks for providing me the opportunity to post my ten favourite gazals/ nazams. Not in any particular order:

The first one is beautiful kalam by Shakeel Badayuni

The poet is complaining about his failure in love and the words he has used to express are just so beautiful. Look at the second shair and the last one, says is it all.

ai mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa
jaane kyon aaj tere naam pe ronaa aayaa
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**yuun to har shaam ummiidon mein guzar jaatii thii
aaj kuchh baat hai jo shaam pe ronaa aayaa

kabhii taqdiir kaa maatam kabhii duniyaaa kaa gilaa
*manzil-e-ishq mein har gaam pe ronaa aayaa *

jab huaa zikr zamaane mein mohabbat kaa 'Shakeel'
mujh ko apane dil-e-naakaam pe ronaa aayaa

My favourite shair in this kalam is :

yuun to har shaam ummiidon mein guzar jaatii thii
aaj kuchh baat hai jo shaam pe ronaa aayaa

this shair describes the ultimate desperation of his lost love and that he is not expecting his love to return

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The second poem is by **Aezaaz Ahmed Aazar****

Tum Aisa Karna Keh Koi Jugnoo Koi Sitara Sambhaal Rakhna
Mere Andhero'n Ki Fikar Choro Bas Apne Ghar Ka Khayal Rakhna****

Ujaar Mosam Mein Rait Dharti Pe Fasal Boi Thi Chaandni Ki
Ab Is Mein Ugnay Lagay Andhere To Kaisa Jee Mein Malaal Rakhna

Diyaar-e-Ulfat Mein Ajnabi Ko Safar hai Darpesh Zulmato'n ka
Kahi'n Woh Raahon Mein Kho Na Jaaye Zara Darechay Ujaal Rakhna

Wo Rasm-o-Raah He Nahi'n Rahe Jab To Naamay Kis Kaam Ke Tumhare
Udhar Se Guzraa Kabhi To LooN Ga Mere Khato'N Ko Nikaal Rakhna

Bicharne Wale Ne Waqt-e-Rukhsat Kuch Is Nazar Se Palat Ke Dekha
Keh Jaise Woh Bhi Yeh Keh Raha Ho Tum Apne Ghar Ka Khayal Rakhna

Yeh Dhoop Chaao'n Ka Khel Hai Ya Khizaa'n Bahaaro'n Ki Ghaat Mein Hai
Naseeb-e-Subh Ujrooj Ho To Nazar Mein Shaam-e-Zawaal Rakhna

Kisay Khabar Thi Keh Kab Ye Mosam Uraa Ke Rukh De Ga Khaak "Aazar"
Tum Ehtiyatan Zamee'n Ke Sar Pe Falak Ki Chaadar Bhi Daal Rakhna

The poet is expressing his reservations towards someone he has lost and is asking him/her to look after themselves rather than worry about him.

My favourite shair in this poem is :**

Kisay Khabar Thi Keh Kab Ye Mosam Uraa Ke Rukh De Ga Khaak "Aazar"
Tum Ehtiyatan Zamee'n Ke Sar Pe Falak Ki Chaadar Bhi Daal Rakhna

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Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (ehsan uncle)

waah uncle , aap ne to sawalon ke jawab , sawal poochne se pehle hi de die :clap:

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Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (ehsan uncle)

My third favourite poem is from one of my favourite poet, Ahmed Faraz:

My favourite line in this poem:

Khud undherey mein hain duniya ko dekhaty hain chiragh.

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Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (ehsan uncle)

Great! A pleasure to read. :k:

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My fourth favourite poem:

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-OV_HqMP5A0I/TzCcU2YGs9I/AAAAAAAABKI/Pz57Rt4NdbI/s1600/Ghazal3.png

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When you get to my age you begin to think of the missed opportunities in life how you would have done things differently and how you crave for those good old days to come back. Make the most of your time in order that you have no regrets tomorrow. This bring me neatly to my fifth selection:

**ye daulat bhii le lo, ye shoharat bhii le lo
bhale chhiin lo mujhase merii javaanii

magar mujhako lautaa do bachapan kaa saavan
vo kaagaz kii kashtii, vo baarish kaa paanii

muhalle kii sabase nishaanii puraanii
vo budhiyaa jise bachche kahate the naanii

vo naanii kii baaton mein pariyon kaa deraa
vo chahare kii jhuriryon mein sadiyon kaa pheraa

bhulaae nahiin bhuul sakataa hai koi
vo chhotii sii raaten vo lambii kahaanii

kadii dhuup mein apane ghar se nikalanaa
vo chidiyaa vo bulabul vo titalii pakadanaa

vo gudiyaa kii shaadii mein ladanaa jhagadanaa
vo jhuulon se giranaa vo gir ke sambhalanaa

vo piital ke chhallon ke pyaare se tohafe
vo tuutii hui chuudiyon kii nishaanii

kabhii ret ke unche tiilon pe jaanaa
gharaunde banaanaa banaake mitaanaa

vo maasuum chahat kii tasviir apanii
vo kvaabon khilaunon kii jaagiir apanii

na duniyaa kaa gam thaa na rishton ke bandhan
badii khuubasuurat thii vo zindagaanii
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Agreed but sometimes you have that opportunity and due to many many reasons you can't avail it and there is nothing much you can do about it.I am already regretting even at this age :(

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Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (ehsan uncle)

In that case it was not meant to be. Yo are too young to regret about life at this stage, your whole life is in front of you. Think positively always look at the glass half full rather than half empty.

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mujhay ronay wali poems achi lagi :crying:

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Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (ehsan uncle)

baggay koh bagga hee pasand aye ga.

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i didn't expect to login ever again and comment on any poetry but i like this ghazal a lot but ehsan sb i dont agree with your description of the shair specially this part "he is not expecting his love to return" he does not mean to say that he is not expecting his love to return, for me a poet when do poetry means he has hope, and hope never die, meray khayal may explanation yeh hai

agar is ko mahboob k hawalay say explain karain tu shair kehta hai k har sham meri is umeed may khushi say guzar jati thi k woo aye ga, lakin aaj ki sham may kuch aisi baat hai k umeed meray pay hawi nahi, bal k is sham may kuch bat hai k mujhay kuch yaad aa gaya or us yaad pay rona aya k wo sham or aaj ki shaam aik jaisi hai faqat mera mahboob meray sath nahi hai, or yehi baat ronay ka sabab hai...

agar is ki dosray andaz say explanation ki jaye tu wo aisay hai (an other view of the shair) insan jab jawan hota hai na tu us may bari energy hoti hai , us ko bari expectations hoti hain bari umedain hotin hain zindagi may, jawani ki har sham aik umeed or expectation say bhari hoti hai k kal aisa ho jaye ya kal ko kuch aisa ho ga, but jb wo burhapay may pohanchta hai or us ko khayal ata hai k may nay zindagi kaisay kamo may guzar di hai jis say zindagi ka maqsad hasil nahi howa jo insan ka ultimate goal hai Allah ki taraf say tu burhapay ki sham may usay apnay kiyay pay sharmindagi feel hoti hai, khonay ka ehsas hota hai or wo pichtaway say rota hai k haye wo sham or yeh sham, waqat aik he zamana badal gaya k may nay zindagi ka haq ada na kiya....

i am open to critics but i hope somebody understand how to understand poetry in different aspects.

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cutenice

:welcome: back

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Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (ehsan uncle)

kaash waqt laut k aa jata

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Cutenice is back :D
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