meri hii pyaas se tha kabhee ye maikada nikla

Pramod · February 13, 2003, 5:02pm

na jaane kaun se jazbaaton ne lafzoN ka shaara lekar es ghazal ko muqamal kiya hai..soncha aap logon se bhii share kar looN…

Ye dil hi na mere dard se jab aashnaaN nikla
Kya huaa ai dost jo tu bhii bewafaa nikla

chala gaya wo chhoD ke sadiyoN ki raah meiN
lamhoN ke saath yaadoN ka par silsilah nikla

aaj tashnakaam hooN maiN tere bazm meiN sakii
meri hii pyaas se tha kabhee ye maikada nikla

Dil hii to toDa tha kisi ne aie mere hakeem
KyoNkar hua ke zakhm mera ye la-dava nikla

aaj hai apnii bulandii par tujhe kitnaa gurur
esii zameeN se yaad rakh, hai aasmaaN nikla

Dilsay · February 13, 2003, 5:16pm

Beautiful....

Philanthrope · February 13, 2003, 7:02pm

Wah

chand_chehra · February 13, 2003, 7:18pm

very nice :k:

Pramod · February 13, 2003, 7:35pm

honsla afzaai ke liye aap logon ka bahot bahot shukriya Dilsey,P}{ä®mä©Ï§t and Chand jii.

system · February 13, 2003, 7:36pm

Beautiful Pramod :k::k:

Pramod · February 13, 2003, 7:54pm

ghazal pasand karne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya *** Vivacious ***

NikamiJano · February 13, 2003, 7:58pm

Re: meri hii pyaas se tha kabhee ye maikada nikla

bohat khoob Pra g thanks 4 sharin.. and eidmubarak ap ne tu nahi kaha chalo hum he kah daitey..

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 13, 2003, 7:58pm

:k: nice one

Pramod · February 14, 2003, 5:53am

Re: Re: meri hii pyaas se tha kabhee ye maikada nikla

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

bohat khoob Pra g thanks 4 sharin..:) and eidmubarak ap ne tu nahi kaha chalo hum he kah daitey..:)
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aap ko bhii eid bahot bahot mubarak ho bahna..

ghazal pasand karne aur honsla afzaai karne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya aap ka....

Pramod · February 14, 2003, 5:58am

shukriya HeArT HaCKeR.......

ameen · March 5, 2003, 7:40pm

very nice

Pramod · March 5, 2003, 9:30pm

Shukriya ameen. .

_Nazish · March 5, 2003, 10:13pm

Beautiful :k:

Pramod · March 6, 2003, 5:22am

shukriya ~Nazish~ .

Jharna_jhankar · March 6, 2003, 7:55am

bahut khoob~

Pramod · March 6, 2003, 6:55pm

honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Jharna jii

hanie · March 10, 2003, 8:54pm

bohat hi acha likha haye .

nikii · March 10, 2003, 9:03pm

Re: meri hii pyaas se tha kabhee ye maikada nikla

zaberdast paromd bhai :k:
thxs 4 sharing

Mehvar · March 10, 2003, 9:44pm

wah wah idhar to bahut ache ache poets hain. Amal aur aap bahut amzing ho. you have it in you. well don:)