Mere saahir se kaho

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Uski muTThi mein bahut roz raha mera wajood

Mere saahir se kaho ab mujhe aazaad kare

love these lines

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Re: Mere saahir se kaho

Yes, muhabbat jab uktahat main badalti hai to yehi haal hota hai :(

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wht does uktahat mean?

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boringness

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:hehe:

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Re: Mere saahir se kaho

Uski muTThi mein bahut roz raha mera wajood
Mere saahir se kaho ab mujhe aazaad kare

bus yahi lines achi hain :cobra:

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Re: Mere saahir se kaho

Apne qaatil ki zahanat se preshan hun main
**Roz ek maut naye tarz ki eejaad kare

**yeh shair bhi boht acha aur maqbool hai, aur akhbar ki shah surkhiyon main bhi nazar aata hai. Parveen Shakir ne likhi hai ye ghazal bhi :hehe:

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**
iss he liye aik he sher hay kaam ka bus :omg:

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:bizz:

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Lagta hai aap ka nick change ker kay Parveen Shakir rakhna parey ga.

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Nice one LP. :k:

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Re: Mere saahir se kaho

:nono: Parveen Shakir to bus ek hi thi :hinna: