meRa hamsafaR jo ajeeb hai tu ajeeb taaR hooN maiN ap be

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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teRi rahmatooN k dayaR maiN teReY badlooN ka pata nahi
abhi aag saRd nahi huwie abhi ik alaa’Oo bujha nahi

meRi baZam dil tu ujaR chuki meRa farsh-e-jaaN tu simat gaya
sabhi ja chukaY meRay ham-nasheeN magaR ik shakas gaya nahi

dar-O-baam sab ne saja leaY sabhi roshni maiN naha leaY
meRi ungliaN be julas gayeN maGar ik chiraag jala nahi

gham-e-zindghi teRi rah maiN shab-e-arzo teRi chah maiN
jo ujaR gaya wo basa nahi jo bichaR gaya wo mila nahi

jo dil-o-nazaR ka sarooR tha meRay pas rah k be dooR tha
wohi ik gulab umeed ka meRi shakh-e-jaaN pe khila nahi

pass-e-karwaN sar rahguzaR maiN shikasta paa hooN tu is leaY
k qadam tu sab se mila leaY meRa dil kisi se mila nahi

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meRa hamsafaR jo ajeeb hai tu ajeeb taaR hooN maiN ap be
mujhaY manzilooN ki khabaR nahi isay rastooN ka pata nahi
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~kabi alwida na kahNa~

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uff jano ge kya zabar10000 gazal hai

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thankz for sharing

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

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pass-e-karwaN sar rahguzaR maiN shikasta paa hooN tu is leaY
k qadam tu sab se mila leaY meRa dil kisi se mila nahi

Anookha jo hay, kaysay millta kissi say....
nice ghazal anyways!

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nice very nice…

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Na kesi ke aankh ka noor hooN
Na kesi k dil ka qaraar hooN

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meRa hamsafaR jo ajeeb hai tu ajeeb taaR hooN maiN ap be
mujhaY manzilooN ki khabaR nahi isay rastooN ka pata nahi

bahot achha hai..Nikami. Thanks.

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

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meRi baZam dil tu ujaR chuki meRa farsh-e-jaaN tu simat gaya
sabhi ja chukaY meRay ham-nasheeN magaR ik shakas gaya nahi

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very nice...
lekin sis, valentine's day par bhi is qadar udaas ghazal?

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Awesome!!! who is da poet janu?

jo yoon barbaad hote hein
wo kab aabaad hote hein
dil e nashaad hote hein
wo ik faryaad hote hein

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thanks Chando g…and yr welcome

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~kabi alwida na kahNa~

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haan wohi na :teary3

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ahhhhhh kash me Nikami na hondi)
thanks any ways…

~kabi alwida na kahNa~

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thanks sweeto

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~kabi alwida na kahNa~

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[quote]
Originally posted by Pramod:
**meRa hamsafaR jo ajeeb hai tu ajeeb taaR hooN maiN ap be
mujhaY manzilooN ki khabaR nahi isay rastooN ka pata nahi

bahot achha hai..Nikami. Thanks.

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thanks Pra jee

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kesi hain Bbg..happy valentine..but ye 13 ko likhi thei..valentine tu ja ha na

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wesay be valentiine tu ap ka

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~kabi alwida na kahNa~

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thanks Naikoo…poet is “Aitbaar sajid”
any ways happy valentine

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aur ap gum kahan hai..nikami ko chor k

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~kabi alwida na kahNa~

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veryyyyyyy nice one nakami ji..

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lafzoon ko itamad ka lahja bhi chahey
zikrey saher baja hay yaqeeney saher bhi chahaey

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Uff so much beautiful ghazal Nik

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Thora sad bhee hai…I loved it.

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thanks yasmeen gggg

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4U

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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wo kesay jaiey cap bara nikama jo hia

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jahan tik jata tik jata

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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NikamiJ as usual very hifi

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*** MuN laa kehNa saiaaN da..
Ghhooom jaa..
Jhooom ja***

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thanks jumroo

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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Kithay tik gaya Nik? Aur agar tik gaya hai to tika hee rehnay dein

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