MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na'jaaney

Amal · March 8, 2003, 12:32am

MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na'jaaney in rat-jagoN ke nargey meiN bus meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

jaarrey ke thandey mosam meiN tanhaai ka alaam mat poocho
haalaat ke ujrrey khemey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

meiN reet-o-rawaaj aur rasmoN sey tanha hi larrta rehta hooN
dunya sey ishq ke jhagrrey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

har baab meiN ja kar dhoonda hey meiN ne humdum kirdaar tera
is mehr-o-wafaa ke qissey meiN bas meiN hi hoon ya tum bhi ho!

tohmat jo jafaa ki mujh pe lagi meiN maanta hooN par ye to kaho
kahaani ke is aakhri hissey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

By: Amal

NikamiJano · March 8, 2003, 12:36am

Re: MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na’jaaney

Beautiful ** Aymal ** no wording . only have 4 u

Dragon_King · March 8, 2003, 12:39am

Buhat Khoob :k:

Guest7777 · March 8, 2003, 1:14am

its very nicely written :k:

_Passionate · March 8, 2003, 2:10am

beautiful Amal ji…simply wonderful:k:

chand_chehra · March 8, 2003, 3:02am

Re: MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na’jaaney

bohat hi khoob :k:
PS
Mujhay to lagta hai k ap hi hain

WiseGuy · March 8, 2003, 3:25am

Re: MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na'jaaney

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na'jaaney
in rat-jagoN ke nargey meiN bus meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

jaarrey ke thandey mosam meiN tanhaai ka alaam mat poocho
haalaat ke ujrrey khemey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

meiN reet-o-rawaaj aur rasmoN sey tanha hi larrta rehta hooN
dunya sey ishq ke jhagrrey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

har baab meiN ja kar dhoonda hey meiN ne humdum kirdaar tera
is mehr-o-wafaa ke qissey meiN bas meiN hi hoon ya tum bhi ho!

tohmat jo jafaa ki mujh pe lagi meiN maanta hooN par ye to kaho
kahaani ke is aakhri hissey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

By: Amal
[/QUOTE]

Bohat khoob :)

ayman · March 8, 2003, 3:37am

wah kya kehna… bohot bohot khoob Amal ji :k:

Bhooli_Bisri · March 8, 2003, 6:59am

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The whole post is wonderful but I am deeply impressed with the above, nice work done Amal… keep it up :k:

Jharna_jhankar · March 8, 2003, 7:07am

~beautiful~

nia_khan · March 8, 2003, 7:27am

*clapping :)

system · March 8, 2003, 7:38am

ahaa maza agaya parh kar

Pramod · March 8, 2003, 12:08pm

meiN reet-o-rawaaj aur rasmoN sey tanha hi larrta rehta hooN
dunya sey ishq ke jhagrrey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

tohmat jo jafaa ki mujh pe lagi meiN maanta hooN par ye to kaho
kahaani ke is aakhri hissey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

simply great
Amal Sahab .

Ye do sher to mujhe behad pasand aaye.

daad kubul kijiye.......

weteyes82 · March 8, 2003, 12:48pm

maza aa gya Amal bhaii…really wonderful sher hai…is aik sher ko daikh k aap ke telent kaa andaaza lagaaya jaa saktaa hai. beautiful!

WAH BUHAT KHOOB! :k:

WELL is ka itnaa mazaa nahin aaya! I mean baaqi saari ghazal k mkouqable mein mujhe ye thoda laga!
Otherwise wat a gr8 work u have done! Keep it up Amal bhai!
:k:

aadhoorighazal · March 8, 2003, 3:08pm

Sunain Amal !!!! "kya main hi hoon ya tum bhi ho ??????"

Kya "AAP" kae paas is ka jawab hae????

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 8, 2003, 5:37pm

Re: MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na'jaaney

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na'jaaney
in rat-jagoN ke nargey meiN bus meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

jaarrey ke thandey mosam meiN tanhaai ka alaam mat poocho
haalaat ke ujrrey khemey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

meiN reet-o-rawaaj aur rasmoN sey tanha hi larrta rehta hooN
dunya sey ishq ke jhagrrey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

har baab meiN ja kar dhoonda hey meiN ne humdum kirdaar tera
is mehr-o-wafaa ke qissey meiN bas meiN hi hoon ya tum bhi ho!

tohmat jo jafaa ki mujh pe lagi meiN maanta hooN par ye to kaho
kahaani ke is aakhri hissey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

By: Amal
[/QUOTE]

Buhat Khuub Amal, Keep it up and
Thanks for sharing with us:-)

Dilsay · March 8, 2003, 6:14pm

Re: MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na'jaaney

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

tohmat jo jafaa ki mujh pe lagi meiN maanta hooN par ye to kaho
kahaani ke is aakhri hissey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

By: Amal
[/QUOTE]

Wasay tu puri ke puri he bohat achi hai... magar this one is more thn all of it....
**
Bass mein he hoon ya tum behi hoo...
**
Amal jee nothing can be said better thn this... and nothing can be said about this all....

Khuda aap ko khush rakhay...

Amal · March 8, 2003, 8:04pm

Re: Re: MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na’jaaney

NikamiJi phool sey ziada khoobsoorat aur kya baat ho sakti hey. Be’had shukriya

Aap ki tajziyaa sar-aaNkhoN par, lekin bhai ‘kahaani ke is aakhri hissey’ meiN hi to saari kahaani posheeda hey. Anyway, pasandeedgi ke leeye bohat bohat shukriya.

Dragon~King, Guest7777, &Passionate, CC, WiseGuy, ayman, Bhooli Bisri, Jharna~jhankar, Nia, Ashk-e-Rawan, Pramod, aadhoorighazal, Gul and Dilsay, aap sab dostoN ka be’had shukriya jo aap ney meri adna si kaavish ko itna saraa’ha. Am obliged:)

Sehar · March 8, 2003, 11:48pm

Another awesome one! Behad achi hai :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 9, 2003, 12:14am

Re: MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na’jaaney

lafaz ke kamee hai meray pass:k::k:
apne jis trha alfaaz chunay hain woh lajavab hai:k:
u have such a excellent taste:k:
hope to see more from ur own poetry:)
thanks a lot for sharing:flower1: