MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na'jaaney

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

wowww boht khobsuret ghazal hei :)

[nikii]

wahhhh bhutt zaberdastttt :k:
thxs 4 sharing Amal
mashAllah bhut achaa likhtay hain appp

[ullujii]

very nice

[aadhoorighazal]

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Dragon~King, Guest7777, &Passionate, CC, WiseGuy, ayman, Bhooli Bisri, Jharna~jhankar, Nia, Ashk-e-Rawan, Pramod, aadhoorighazal, Gul and Dilsay, aap sab dostoN ka be'had shukriya jo aap ney meri adna si kaavish ko itna saraa'ha. Am obliged:)

Kya main nae bhi "SARAA'HA" hai ???? shayed aap nae theek sae parha nahin !!!

[Amal]

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*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
lafaz ke kamee hai meray pass:k:
apne jis trha alfaaz chunay hain woh lajavab hai:k:
u have such a excellent taste:k:
hope to see more from ur own poetry
thanks a lot for sharing:flower1:

Thanx for so generous comments:flower1:

~Sehar~, Masoom Muskaan, nikii and ullujii, pasandeedgi ke leeye bohat bohat shukriya:flower1:

*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *
Kya main nae bhi “SARAA’HA” hai ??? shayed aap nae theek sae parha nahin !!!

Even if you didn’t appreciate it, even if you
didn’t like it, aap ki tashreef-aawari ke leeye
hi sahi, be’had shukriya.

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Doobara parhnay par Tax tou nahiN hay naa :~P
Beautiful :~)

[Dilsay]

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*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
Doobara parhnay par Tax tou nahiN hay naa :~P
Beautiful :~)
[/QUOTE]

haan tax hai ya dua ka Khuda Amal jee ko khush rakhay.... aur baqi behi sub doostoon ko khush rakhay.... Ameen....

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

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*Originally posted by Amal: *

Thanx for so generous comments:flower1:

u always welcome:flower1:
just keep sharing:)

[Mehvar]

Amal what is your real name? Are you Wasi Shah?

[Mehvar]

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*Originally posted by Amal: *

MeiN raat gaey sab taaroN sey tera poochta hooN par na'jaaney in rat-jagoN ke nargey meiN bus meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

jaarrey ke thandey mosam meiN tanhaai ka alaam mat poocho
haalaat ke ujrrey khemey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

meiN reet-o-rawaaj aur rasmoN sey tanha hi larrta rehta hooN
dunya sey ishq ke jhagrrey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

har baab meiN ja kar dhoonda hey meiN ne humdum kirdaar tera
is mehr-o-wafaa ke qissey meiN bas meiN hi hoon ya tum bhi ho!

tohmat jo jafaa ki mujh pe lagi meiN maanta hooN par ye to kaho
kahaani ke is aakhri hissey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

By: Amal

Its mindblowing:k:…You can’t be any ordinary writer, you must be Wasi Shah or some other mature poet.

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

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*Originally posted by Mehvar: *

Its mindblowing:k:…You can’t be any ordinary writer, you must be Wasi Shah or some other mature poet.

i’m thinking the same way:)

[Amal]

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*Originally posted by Mehvar: *
Its mindblowing:k:…You can’t be any ordinary writer, you must be Wasi Shah or some other mature poet.

Aap ney sahi pehchaana:) MeiN Wasi Shah hi hooN. Just give me another 100 years and I will be of his class. Thanx for your comments anyway:)

*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
Doobara parhnay par Tax tou nahiN hay naa :~P
Beautiful :~)

Aek baar parrhye, hazaar baar parrhye, parrhney ki cheez hey baar baar parrhye

[chand_chehra]

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*Originally posted by Mehvar: *

Its mindblowing:k:…You can’t be any ordinary writer, you must be Wasi Shah or some other mature poet.

ewwwwwwwwwk wasi shah amal’s poetry is waaaaaaaay better than his…

[hanie]

once again,
a wonderfull peace

me pooch sakti hoon aap kaunsi cheez se itni inspire hoote haye, ke aap har baar itna acha likhte haye?

it feels like you just said what I was thinking.
marvelous.

[Mehvar]

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*Originally posted by Amal: *

Aap ney sahi pehchaana:) MeiN Wasi Shah hi hooN. Just give me another 100 years and I will be of his class. Thanx for your comments anyway:)

[/QUOTE]

ok i got it:) but I still say you are mindblowing. bt aap pal do pal ke shair to belkul nahe lagte hain.:) kia ap idhar regularly likhtae hain?

[Mehvar]

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*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

ewwwwwwwwwk wasi shah amal's poetry is waaaaaaaay better than his... :)
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pleaze dont say anything against Wasi Shah. I love his poetry. I didnt read Amal but I must say he seems promising lakin Wasi Shah rulzzzzz:)

[aadhoorighazal]

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*Originally posted by Mehvar: *

ok i got it:) but I still say you are mindblowing. bt aap pal do pal ke shair to belkul nahe lagte hain.:) kia ap idhar regularly likhtae hain?
[/QUOTE]

See Amal, now you may start understanding what , I keep stressing upon..........................

[Paglee]

[Paglee]

Amal i always compare u with Bashir badar and mohsan naqvi ...i like wasi shah but not all of em u know ma taste...he writes kinda open but still achi likhta....but comparing to wasi shah ap ki gazalin zaida mature aur aur (lufz sath chor gaye) u know me always poor in words..:(

any ways aik aur Beauti.......:) keep it up and keep writting4 UR fanz...
hmmm like me ha na ..:)

[_kashish]

jaarrey ke thandey mosam meiN tanhaai ka alaam mat poocho
haalaat ke ujrrey khemey meiN bas meiN hi hooN ya tum bhi ho!

Amal bohat shukria , apni itni achi koshish hum se share kerne k liay :)