meiN ney thehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikheiN heiN

Amal · February 6, 2003, 11:29pm

MohabbatoN meiN bhi kai madd-o-jazar deikhey heiN saba ki dastak pe toot'tey huwey ghar deikhey heiN

meiN us ki sookhi hui aaNkhoN pe kya yaqeeN karta!
meiN ney thehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikhey heiN

pat’tey toot’tey heiN to shaakoN ko khooN rulaatey heiN
tum ney khizaaN meiN kabhi ghaor sey shajar deikhey heiN!

kisi chaman ka mujhey koi nishaaN kaheeN na mila
haaN dasht ke saaey meiN ney ta’hadd-e-nazar deikhey heiN

meiN ney na thakney ka sabaq seekha hey parindoN sey
wo jab miley heiN un ke paroN meiN safar deikhey heiN

nasha ho ‘ishq’ ka ya ‘janm-o-janam’ ke rishtoN ka
meiN ney dinoN meiN utartey ye asar deikhey heiN

By: Amal

NikamiJano · February 6, 2003, 11:34pm

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bohat khoobsurat …again i don’t have any word to say…

hayaa · February 6, 2003, 11:38pm

You words leave my speechless every time.

Beautifully written..

_Nazish · February 6, 2003, 11:55pm

It's beautiful Amal.
bohat khoob :)

Paglee · February 7, 2003, 12:20am

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

meiN ney na thakney ka sabaq seekha hey parindoN sey
wo jab miley heiN un ke paroN meiN safar deikhey heiN

[/QUOTE]

Beautifulllllllllll yahooooooooooooo feb ki gazal of the month a gaye GS per.....chalo acha kia Amal wait nahi karna parey gha..ab ap k pass hmmm let me count 24 din hain aur gazal of the march main ..abhi se he tayari shoro kaar dain :p

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 7, 2003, 2:08am

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i’m speechless:k::k::k::k::k:
boht he Alaa likhe hai ap ne:)
mera khail hai ab ap apna Dewan-e-Amal publish karwa he lo:)
per mujhe aik lafz samhaj mein nahi aya ‘paroN’ is it foot or par parindoo ke

WiseGuy · February 7, 2003, 2:50am

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

MohabbatoN meiN bhi kai madd-o-jazar deikhey heiN
saba ki dastak pe toot'tey huwey ghar deikhey heiN

meiN us ki sookhi hui aaNkhoN pe kya yaqeeN karta!
meiN ney thehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikhey heiN

pat'tey toot'tey heiN to shaakoN ko khooN rulaatey heiN
tum ney khizaaN meiN kabhi ghaor sey shajar deikhey heiN!

kisi chaman ka mujhey koi nishaaN kaheeN na mila
haaN dasht ke saaey meiN ney ta'hadd-e-nazar deikhey heiN

meiN ney na thakney ka sabaq seekha hey parindoN sey
wo jab miley heiN un ke paroN meiN safar deikhey heiN

nasha ho 'ishq' ka ya 'janm-o-janam' ke rishtoN ka
meiN ney dinoN meiN utartey ye asar deikhey heiN

By: Amal
[/QUOTE]

Bohat khoob! :)
Simply the best

Dilsay · February 7, 2003, 4:52am

Beautiful....

Bhooli_Bisri · February 7, 2003, 6:46am

bahut achi kavish hai

chand_chehra · February 7, 2003, 10:08am

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so true :k: mane bhi dekhay hain dinoN main ye asar tottay

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 7, 2003, 11:40am

boht achee ghazal likhe hei :k:

Koyal · February 7, 2003, 12:47pm

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ap dono ko nazar aiey tu koyal ko keon nahi nazar aiey:crying:

Amal · February 7, 2003, 4:22pm

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NikamiJi ghazal pasand karney ke leeye bohat bohat shukriya. hayaa, ~Nazish~, WiseGuy, Dilsay, CC, *Masoom Muskaan* and Koyal, aap logoN ka bhi be'had shukriya. Thanx really very much:)

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by **Paglee:* *
Beautifulllllllllll yahooooooooooooo feb ki gazal of the month a gaye GS per.....chalo acha kia Amal wait nahi karna parey gha..ab ap k pass hmmm let me count 24 din hain aur gazal of the march main ..abhi se he tayari shoro kaar dain :p
[/QUOTE]

'Paglee' kaheeN ki ;)

Bhooli Bisri Welcome to GS...&...thanx for liking the ghazal.

ghazal kisi ke it's "paroN" (wings) not peiroN
(feet) :) ...pasandeedgi ke leeye bohat shukriya:)

Guest7777 · February 7, 2003, 6:24pm

great job again :) and i agree with ghazal kisi ki you should definetly publish your work so lots of other people can read and enjoy it.

punjabi_kuri · February 7, 2003, 6:42pm

bohat khoob,bohat khoob:k:

Eastern_Thoughts · February 7, 2003, 7:13pm

Very Nice Amal! :k: Like Always

weteyes82 · February 7, 2003, 7:18pm

meiN ney thehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikhey heiN

ye kya amal jii..ye kya kyaa daikhna shoroo ker diyaa aap ne.. achhe aasaaar nahin hain yeee...sambhalo bhai sambhalo..

*pat'tey toot'tey heiN to shaakoN ko khooN rulaatey heiN
tum ney khizaaN meiN kabhi ghaor sey shajar deikhey heiN! *

touchy..buhat khoob

*meiN ney na thakney ka sabaq seekha hey parindoN sey
wo jab miley heiN un ke paroN meiN safar deikhey heiN *

excellent..bait-ul-ghazal hua ye to jnab

*nasha ho 'ishq' ka ya 'janm-o-janam' ke rishtoN ka
meiN ney dinoN meiN utartey ye asar deikhey heiN *

naa amal jii..aisaa to na kaho naa..wo illusions hote hain rishte nahin..
I seriously disagree!

Well buhat hi piyaari koshih..Im impressed...really :)
jaari rakhein.

nikii · February 7, 2003, 10:11pm

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bhut hi khoubsourtt zaberdastt :k:
thanks for sharing

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 8, 2003, 1:50am

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okey dokey:0thanks:)

_Passionate · February 8, 2003, 3:02am

simply wonderfull…awesomee…:k: