meiN ney thehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikheiN heiN

weteyes82 thanx a lot for such a detailed
analysis. The more readers say the more good I
feel. I mean it gives you a better picture as to
what actually are you doing. So thanx very much for all
this. Sirf aek chotti si baat, Khusbhu nazar nahi
aati, lekin hoti hey! Hawaa dikhaai nahi deti,
lekin wo bhi maojood hey! isi tarah kabhi kabhi
thehrey huwey paaniyoN meiN bhi bhaNwar hotey heiN.
Farq sirf ye hey ke unhey har aaNkh nahi deikh
paati. Is qisam ke bhaNwar deikhney ke leeye khaas
qisam ki benaai ki zaroorat hoti hey. Lehaaza aap
ko to mujhey daad deni chahiye ke mujhey qudrat ney
aesi binaai sey navaaza hey ke jis sey meiN thehrey
huwey paani meiN bhi bhaNwar deikh sakta hooN. :slight_smile:
Kheir ye to sheir tha, aur aap ko pata hey
mohabbat, jang aur sheir-o-shaeri mein sab chalta hey:)
Umeed hey aaenda bhi aap ke tajzeeye isi tarhaN miltey raheiN ge.


Guest7777, punjabi kuri !!!, Amjad bhai, nikii
and &Passionate, ghazal pasand karney ke
leeye aap dostoN ka bohat bohat shukriya:flower1::slight_smile:

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*Originally posted by Amal: *

weteyes82
thehrey huwey paaniyoN meiN bhi bhaNwar hotey heiN.
Farq sirf ye hey ke unhey har aaNkh nahi deikh
paati. Is qisam ke bhaNwar deikhney ke leeye khaas
qisam ki benaai ki zaroorat hoti hey. Lehaaza aap
ko to mujhey daad deni chahiye ke mujhey qudrat ney
aesi binaai sey navaaza hey ke jis sey meiN thehrey
huwey paani meiN bhi bhaNwar deikh sakta hooN. :)


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Exactelly Amal ya tu daaNa logo ko ye chezaiN nazaR ati ya hum jesay serphirey i mean pagloon ko cuz un ka tu sar he ghooma hota ha na ;)
har aik k bus main nahi hota "W82" asi chezain dekhna..:p

Khusbhu nazar nahi
aati, lekin hoti hey! Hawaa dikhaai nahi deti,
lekin wo bhi maojood hey! isi tarah kabhi kabhi
thehrey huwey paaniyoN meiN bhi bhaNwar hotey heiN.
Farq sirf ye hey ke unhey har aaNkh nahi deikh
paati. Is qisam ke bhaNwar deikhney ke leeye khaas
qisam ki benaai ki zaroorat hoti hey.

beshaq...lekin apni baat pe rehte hue ...ji haan magar hoti ye khatarnak hii hai..is liye sambhal jaao....

** Lehaaza aap ko to mujhey daad deni chahiye ke mujhey qudrat ney
aesi binaai sey navaaza hey ke jis sey meiN thehrey
huwey paani meiN bhi bhaNwar deikh sakta hooN. **

Amal jii dad daine ke buhat se tareeqe hote hain..zaroori nahin wah wah ker k hii daad jii jai....is dad ko bhi samjhne k liye nazar hi kii zroorat hai.....daad dene k buhat se tareeqe hote hain.
aur haan itna zarf bhi hona chahiyr k daad k saath disagreements bardasht kiye jain.. behrhaal dad ka ye comic tareeqa aap ku buraa lagaa to next time aap kii post pe serious daad hii dain gee...worry not

Umeed hey aaenda bhi aap ke tajzeeye isi tarhaN miltey raheiN ge.
sure..agar aap chahein to..

Amal Sahab,

Once again, a great ghazal. ye aur aakhiri sher to bahot hi lajawaab hai

meiN us ki sookhi hui aaNkhoN pe kya yaqeeN karta!
meiN ney thehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikhey heiN

daad kuobl kijiye....

Re: meiN ney thehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikheiN heiN

nasha ho ‘ishq’ ka ya ‘janm-o-janam’ ke rishtoN ka
meiN ney dinoN meiN utartey ye asar deikhey heiN

Mein saalon se nashe mein hoon, Ab mein aap ko bad naseeb kahoon to bura mat manaiyega!! :slight_smile:

Buhat khoosburat ghazal hai Amal :k:

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*Originally posted by Amal: *


MohabbatoN meiN bhi kai madd-o-jazar deikhey heiN
saba ki dastak pe toot'tey huwey ghar deikhey heiN

meiN us ki sookhi hui aaNkhoN pe kya yaqeeN karta!
meiN ney thehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikhey heiN

pat'tey toot'tey heiN to shaakoN ko khooN rulaatey heiN
tum ney khizaaN meiN kabhi ghaor sey shajar deikhey heiN!

kisi chaman ka mujhey koi nishaaN kaheeN na mila
haaN dasht ke saaey meiN ney ta'hadd-e-nazar deikhey heiN

meiN ney na thakney ka sabaq seekha hey parindoN sey
wo jab miley heiN un ke paroN meiN safar deikhey heiN

nasha ho 'ishq' ka ya 'janm-o-janam' ke rishtoN ka
meiN ney dinoN meiN utartey ye asar deikhey heiN

By: Amal
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Marvellous Amal Jii Thanks for sharing :)

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Originally posted by **weteyes82:* *

...itna zarf bhi hona chahiyr k daad k saath disagreements bardasht kiye jain.. behrhaal dad ka ye comic tareeqa aap ku buraa lagaa to next time aap kii post pe serious daad hii dain gee...worry not

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If it was a criticism at all, how lovely it was :)
Resenting criticism or disagreements will be the
very last thing I will do in my life. You have my
words! Had I disliked your disagreement however, I
would haven't asked for more by requesting your
continues analysis. It's simple na ;) Anyhow, if
any of my word suggested that you were being critic
and that it did not go well with me, I unconditionally
render a profound apology. Yet, my first request still
stand sincere - apney tajziyoN sey navaaztey rahiye ga :)


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Originally posted by **Capricorn:* *
Mein saalon se nashe mein hoon, Ab mein aap ko bad naseeb kahoon to bura mat manaiyega!!

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Cap Allah aap ko aap ka 'nasha' mubaarak
karey aur Allah karey ke aap tamaam-umr is nashey
meiN raheiN. Aameen!!!:) Rahi baat bad'naseebi ki,
to merey bhai Allah ka mujh par is qadar karam hey
ke meiN beyaan bhi nahi kar sakta. Aap meri shaeri
sey merey haalaat ka andaaza na kareiN kiuN ke ye
meiN sirf apney leeye nahi likhta, aap ko andaaza
to ho ga hi ke hamaarey aas paas kitney log heiN
jo aap ki tarhaN ya meri tarha khush-naseeb heiN.
Ab hum thehrey shaer, hameiN to har kisi ki baat
karni parrti hey na...Anyway, ghazal pasand karney
ke leeye be'had shukriya :)

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*Originally posted by Amal: *


meiN us ki sookhi hui aaNkhoN pe kya yaqeeN karta!
meiN ney thehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikhey heiN

** Beautiful **

nasha ho 'ishq' ka ya 'janm-o-janam' ke rishtoN ka
meiN ney dinoN meiN utartey ye asar deikhey heiN

** janay woh kon khush naseeb hotay hain **

By: Amal
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Is waqat agar aap dekhain tu, 27 replys hain aur 155 views, aap ki is post kae leyae...............and if I confess that 20,or a little more veiws are because of me!!!!! would you trust me ????

Do you still need words ?????????

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*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *
Is waqat agar aap dekhain tu, 27 replys hain aur 155 views, aap ki is post kae leyae...............and if I confess that 20,or a little more veiws are because of me!!!!! would you trust me ????

Do you still need words ?????????
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how do we know 20 views from U....i can say about 100 views from Paglee no one believe so we want WORDS..;)...:p

no amal jii it wasnt a cricism at all....just a wah wah in lively or comic style...kher ho jaata hai,... its ok
no hard feelings!
thnx for clarification again.
:);)

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*Originally posted by Paglee: *

Exactelly Amal ya tu daaNa logo ko ye chezaiN nazaR ati ya hum jesay serphirey i mean pagloon ko cuz un ka tu sar he ghooma hota ha na ;)
har aik k bus main nahi hota "W82" asi chezain dekhna..:p
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Jee jee Paglee aap ka sir yaqeenaN ghooma sa hee lagta.. ;)

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Bohat khoob :k: