mehhhh

[fghd]

Na Tha waasTa sher say Na thay shaeeri say AashNaa
teri dard ki yaad nay hamay sher kehna sikha diya

p.s. magar phir bhi ghalat hi likha

[P_G]

Re: mehhhh

wow nice try Emmm : )

[P_G]

Re: mehhhh

emm wat about it

Sher-o- shaire say hum hoa kertay thay Na ashna
tere yaad kay derd nay humain sher kehna sikha diya ?

[Jhuki_Nigahein]

Re: mehhhh

nice try

[system]

Re: mehhhh

I think ye is terha ziada behtar lagay ga :

Na Tha waasTa koi sher say Na hi shaeeri say thay AashNaa
teri dard ne, teri yaad nay hamay sher kehna sikha diya

[canpaki]

Re: mehhhh

[fghd]

Re: mehhhh

hehehe I totally forgot about it :D

[AQ]

Re: mehhhh

you can become PERMANENT here…
Phatimah used to do the same with Joke forum