MARCH 23rd: Make a Poem...

Shak · March 22, 2010, 10:29pm

Nice L.K and Niksik. :k:

RupayHalwa · March 23, 2010, 2:02pm

I’ll try…

Watan se Mohabbat ki qadar kiya pochtay ho mujeh se
Mein to Watan ki Zara-e-Khak bhi nahi hoon

Kis tarha karo bayan is watani-chahat ko
Bayan karne ke liyeh kalm ke saath bhi nahi hoon

Kaise batlao logon ko apni pehchan
Watan ki azmat se mein saroshar bhi nahi hoon

Woh Watan jis ne Othaya hamain Bar-e-saghir ki tarikiyon se
Ussay ab roshan karne ke liyeh Shamah ke saath bhi nahi hoon

Azadi ki talab ne bana diya hamara Watan Pakistan
Azadan zindagi ki tadbeeron ke saath phir bhi nahi hoon

Mein Watan se Muhabbat ki qadar kaise bataoon tum ko
Mein to 23 March 1940 ki awaaz to kiya Alfaz bhi nahi hoon

Watan se Mohabbat ki qadar kiya pochtay ho mujeh se
Mein to khabi ghulami ki zingeer ke paas bhi nahi hoo.

Watan se Mohabbat ki qadar kiya pochtay ho mujeh se…

I’m sure it’s very good, but I don’t understand most of it…!

lethal_kamikaze · March 23, 2010, 7:51pm

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RupayHalwa what u didn’t understand

RupayHalwa · March 24, 2010, 5:42am

Lafz-e-mushkil-e-urdu.

lethal_kamikaze · March 24, 2010, 3:51pm

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Oky :k: please write the lafz Opps urdu words which u didn’t understand i’ll translate it

Reha · March 25, 2010, 1:57pm

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Shall we begin the judging?

Shak · March 25, 2010, 3:27pm

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Niksik · March 25, 2010, 5:42pm

Reha, please don’t include my poem in this contest as I’m a mod here :hinna:

Reha · March 25, 2010, 5:46pm

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Thread being closed for judging!