MARCH 23rd: Make a Poem...

Okay aadmi and aurton,

In five days its 23rd March → Pakistan Day.

I think everyone should make a poem about the Pakistani way of life and what attracts them most about being a Pakistani. It doesn’t have to be very long and please it should be YOURS and not made from nakal shakal from the internet.

The moderator sahibaan will vote on the best one and the most voted wins.

(This thread better have tons of replies :emmy: ) Otherwise saaray nikummay Pakistani ho ge. Your being patriotic Pakistani correlates with replying to this thread.

:snooty:

And please no flooding, only give a seedha saadha jawab to what the thread asks for.

My beautiful Pakistan

You have given us tears,

When we needed smiles

After all these years,

All we have had are trials

The state of our country, we should hang our head in shame,

Be it corruption, politics, sport earhtqaukes or flood

It feels like all we have is ourselves to blame,

Our ancestors gave their sweat and blood

To get this beautiful land,

They must be tunring in their graves

The time has come to make a stand,

Instead of spedning our lives as slaves

The beauty of the North,

The beautiful skies that move backwards and forth

The great mountains and the beautiful lakes,

Whose water and streams are as delicate as flakes

The ruggedness of the South

The red forts in Lahore,

The diveristy of Karachi,

The blue waves and the brown sand

And the vastness of the sea

This beautiful land is a gift from God,

Whether we like it or not is our home and the land of free (OK big exag'ion, Pakistan is as free as my friend's budgie is in his cage)

People of the crescent and the star,

The time has come to stand up

And be counted for wherever you are,

Whoever you are

The nation needs us,

The nation is sccarred

The time has come to give our blood and work hard,

To make sacrifices so we can make gains

Otherwise our problems, our troubles will continue to fall on ous like droplets of rain

As long as we work in his name

God will help us from the sky,

So we can puff our chests and hold our heads high

**
My beautiful Pakistan**

Okay not exactly super and by the looks of it I don't like anything specific about Pakistan, just everything!

Atleast I made a try so come on people! It can be two lines or however short you want it!

Give your brain cells some creative activity.

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This thread has a terrible echo of my voice.

-Mutters darkly-

:nahi: is the only shareefana smiley I can think of right now!

:snooty:

^ I’m sorry to hear that Shak. Here is my peom:

If roses are red, and violets are blue
Then, what the hell is the colour violet??

:rotfl: Kidding! Here it is (from mera khud ka iklota dimagh :snooty: )

Mera Pakistan hai yeh tera Pakistan hai
Is pe dil qurbaan meri jaan bhi qurbaan hai

:jhanda:

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Dil Dil Pakistan
Jaan Jaan Pakistan...

and that is all I know!

kehtay hain ahbaab kia rakha hay yahan

*her pal hay khof o hiraas or moot ka der yahan *

na jaanay kahan say aa jaaye koi goleee

na janay dhamka kub ho jaaye kahaan

*massail hain zyada ,hain kam wasaail yahan *

bijlee ka buhraan or aatay ka fuqdaan

*cheena ki qeemat chooye asmaaan *

*kehtay hain ahbaab ab kia rakha hay yahan *

*mere dil k andar say aate hay sada *

*kuch ho ya na ho yeh hey mera mAkaan *

or kon jata hay chor k apna AashiaaN

*yeh mere chaman ye mera watan *

*milli mujh ko is say duniya main pehcchaan *

*mera sub say pyaara pakistaaN *

jhanda

shaair-e-gupshup **
**P_G

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Pakistan...
The land of my parents,
Who left it long, long ago.


Occasionally we return,
Like an echo,
To find a land that is,
In some parts a home,
But mostly a place,
From where we want to escape.


Pakistan...
It is the people who make it,
It is the people who break it.


Pakistan...
The land of my parents,
Who left it long, long ago.
If they had not,
I would have been more patriotic.

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^ I think that my poem is the best out of all of them. I must win.

Your and P-G’s poems…fantastic. :eek:

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mera pyara pakistaan
jaise special garlic naan
jaise eid ki dukaan
jaise arse ke baad khaya hua meetha paan
lekin jab se badli hai mulk ki kamaan
her cheez ka hua fiqdaan
kise pata ke kaha hai zameen ya aasman
lekin phir hai gumaan
ke yeh mulk, jo hai humari pehchaan
aik din bane ga duniya ki shaan
mera pyara Pakistan

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^ i think we have a clear winner here with an amazing rhyme scheme and imagry and all that jazz we learned in english class with a hint of humor :p

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^ Libran, you forgot to add the final line "And I will keep dreaming"

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hahahahahah libran

nice rupay n pg!

Listen mate, mine is definitely THE clear winner here bcos it is HONEST to goodness. Closely followed by P_G's, which I do very much admire.

I have to say that your's would have been more appreciated by me, had the format NOT been 1947 a love story, or 1948 a love story, or 1937 a love story or whatever it was.

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Rupay, so modest!

:vivo:

haha that's awesome! You win for most comedic!!

PG and RH...that is very deep!

two thumbs up

yeah dude way to be modest ... and i don't get wat u meant by all these love stories ... maybe i am missing a connection here

Lmao Libran

Its hilarous!

Garlic naan. :rotfl:

:k:

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LOL thats wat i was eating lol whn i came up with the brilliant idea

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Pakistanis and food…

Very apt I say. :hehe: