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nice libran :k:
Don’t feign innocence, your poem was jaise this song…
dudee are you kidding me … the only thing my poem and this thing has in common is that they rhymee … and so does a billion other poems … c’mon i thought u were a better sport than this
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I loooove this thread!
You guys are doing great...keep it up!
mera pyara pakistaan jaise special garlic naan jaise eid ki dukaan jaise arse ke baad khaya hua meetha paan lekin jab se badli hai mulk ki kamaan her cheez ka hua fiqdaan kise pata ke kaha hai zameen ya aasman lekin phir hai gumaan ke yeh mulk, jo hai humari pehchaan aik din bane ga duniya ki shaan mera pyara Pakistan
LOOOL!!!
It all about capturing the audience with humour!!
I vote libranrulz
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Nice poems..
dudee are you kidding me ... the only thing my poem and this thing has in common is that they rhymee ... and so does a billion other poems .... c'mon i thought u were a better sport than this
I don't buy it. Too many Jaise's in your poem, too many similarities in the iambic pentameters of both your poem and this song, you can't say this is just a coincidence.
I vote my poem is still the best, I don't have any influence from Bollywood!
Libran all the wayyyyy 
It was the only one which actually made me miss Pak, or maybe it was the garlic naan part 
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aww lovely thread....
and the naan poem was great....
hope things get better in our beloved country:(
I don't buy it. Too many Jaise's in your poem, too many similarities in the iambic pentameters of both your poem and this song, you can't say this is just a coincidence.
I vote my poem is still the best, I don't have any influence from Bollywood!
loll dude ... u don't need to buy anything ... and when u said it i do use jaise alot in my poem and lol thats not cuz of the song that just shows how crappy of a poem i am that i just stick to one thing that kinda sorta works for me ... thats pretty much it ... and i don't even kno wat iambic pentameters are
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libran app nay mere poem ki zameen chore kee hai ...or alfaz bhi miltay jultay
app ko 203 daafa k tehat phaansi ki saza hai
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kaunsi poem P_G ... gosh why is everyone after meee
aww lovely thread....
and the naan poem was great....
hope things get better in our beloved country:(
What's wrong with u ppl, u think with your stomachs only???
BTW - I've never heard of garlic naan in Pakistan, only seen on takeaway menus here in the UK.
If Garlic naan is Pakistani, then it has been lifted from the Italian Garlic Bread, therefore not genuinely Pakistani. So there!
What's wrong with u ppl, u think with your stomachs only???
BTW - I've never heard of garlic naan in Pakistan, only seen on takeaway menus here in the UK.
If Garlic naan is Pakistani, then it has been lifted from the Italian Garlic Bread, therefore not genuinely Pakistani. So there!
The poem did not say it is Pakistani naan.
And P_G have a good spirit. So what some words sounded similar. All very nice poems. :)
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^ Daal me kuch kaala hai.
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okay fine rupay halwa man ... i won't argue with u ... u can win ... i don't really mind :)
My poyumm was THE best and THE most original hoonh
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hhuma two lines is a sher ... not a poem